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ugh... what I was trying to do doesn't show, so here's a better example "slipping in and out of ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,conciousness of the music" "And it is .....already ..........faded ...away"

There's a couple grammatical errors at the beginning. "Wherever he goes, death followed..." needs a comma, for example; nit-picky stuff, but it does define the difference between bad, good, and ...

To get confused now. I write to be read. A review, no matter good or bad, is always helpful :). Thus, thank you for the information. Most of what I ...

Thanks.

These lyrics rhyme very infrequently, so you probably won't get a good melody. These lyrics vary syllablicly, so nothing will fit rhythmically. It'll have to rely on creativity in order ...

Also, this is an opinion based matter, not really worth arguing over.

I don't think it's dramatic. It's very overdone, but so is everything. The villain wants revenge... that's extremely overdone.

when did i lie? maybe i can edit that. also, i write all in 30 minutes lol... or at least, everything on here... and usually less.

woot. Hooray for original content! lol

Please send me a message to remind me to review this. I've only 30 minutes till work. I just first wanted to find a work of literature that I liked ...

I'm sorry for vagueness, but there was no specific location that I was asking God to show mercy. I just asked Him to show it. I agree with you imagery ...

It is a religious piece, as said in the description. I'm sorry you didn't see much clarity. When a personal pronoun is capitalized, it is usually referenced to God, which ...

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