shulchan

Hiya! So the first thing I noticed was the first line. Now, there is nothing inherently wrong with the first line, but I just think that "as fast as her ...

Hiya, I'm here to do a review as requested! So I felt this was pretty good overall, but there are a few things I'd like to point out. Firstly, I ...

I thought this was really good. i don't really have much to say, because everyone really did say everything else, but I just wanted to let you know that you ...

The young boy lay silently asleep, he could not have been any older than 16. You put a coma between these lines to connect them, but they have nothing to ...

I really liked this piece. I thought it was well-written and it had me hooked. There were only a couple of things that bothered me. Firstly, I think you should ...

This really caught my interest! I stop reading most things after the first few paragraphs, but this captured my attention until the end! I would love to read more if ...

This is really cute! The twist at the end was very unexpected but I felt you could sort of build up some more suspense beforehand, being as that seemed to ...

This is really good! Everything flowed very smoothly and it kept me captivated from beginning to end. It left me with the good kind of questions and got me thinking. ...

Considering that English is not your native language, this is very good. You do have a lot of grammar/ punctuation mistakes but your plot is great. It's captivating and has ...

This is really good! Most of the time I get bored after the first paragraph or so but you kept me leaning forward in my seat, wanting to know more. ...

First off, I'd like to say that I rarely ever leave reviews but I felt I had to for this story because it's so amazing. The story hooked me right ...

I really like your style of writing. You described everything really well and I could really imagine the surroundings. My favorite line was- "I'm going home with a lamb and ...

I really like this poem, and I'm glad it's featured. You described everything really well and I really like your style of writing. There are a couple of spelling and ...

This poem is really good! It flows really smoothly, and I love your style of writing. I especially like the lines- "That moment when, He asks to dance, A shared ...