shiney1

Wow. This is good. I'll admit, it didn't grad me at first (Maybe use a better opener?) But as I kept reading I enjoyed it. Imagery 7/10 (it's hard to ...

Despite the views of others, I liked this poem. It flowed well, and though it was rather repetitive, that was this poem's style, and I can understand that. I wish ...

Wow.... That was simply AMAZING! The imagery was phenomenal, and the whole story flowed pretty well. I love the message, and I would love to be in the narrator's shoes. ...

Wonderful poem! Real Christians are freaks of society, as they go against what is "normal." In the words of tobymac's Jesus Freak song: What will people do when they hear ...

This is a nice poem. It was interesting in a depressing manner, and it had a good amount of feeling in it. I feel that there could have been a ...

Hey, shiney1 here! I like this poem. It is simple, to the point and very interesting. One if the big problem I have though, is that I feel this hardly ...

This was very nice. I haven't seen anything like it on YWS, so it was refreshing from all of the sob romance stories between lovers and such. The "sorry's" were ...

Hi, shiney1 here :) I like the way the poem flowed, and it had a good bit of imagery in it. The ending was nice and smooth, and closed the ...

Well, I liked this poem a lot. I haven't seen one like it, even though the subject used a fair amount of time, and that's a good thing. It flowed ...

Writer's Block!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD That's the first thing I thought of when I read this. I have never seen a poem like this before! A+ for originality. Some critics would say ...

Hey, shiney1 here :) I like the feeling the poem has, and the subject. It didn't have as much imagery as I would have liked, but it had a fair ...

XD XD XD XD I just love that picture, for one! I also love the topic and how you conveyed your message. I agree totally with what you said about ...

Hi, shiney1 here! The title sounded interesting, so I took a look. The first line was a bit intriguing as well, but as I read the next line, and the ...

Hey, shiney1 here! You are the ONLY person I have seen on this site that does acrostics like me, in other words, does not murder the word and makes the ...

Hey, shiney1 here! Okay. This poem was...different. I like the topic, but it is not that easy to understand. It is choppy in many places, hardly flows, and it leaves ...