Goodbye Stranger

That was very deep and touching! Very angsty, very teenage, but good! I'm not sure if it was based on real life experience or fiction, I won't ask, but it had a very real feeling in it. I am truely touched by this. Very good job at reaching out to people. Happy writing!

This is a nice poem. It was interesting in a depressing manner, and it had a good amount of feeling in it.
I feel that there could have been a bit more imagery, though, and some places did not flow as well as others did.

They say blood is thicker than water
but not blood I never knew I had This line kind of messed me up, it sound s a bit strange; I had to read it about three times the first time and I still couldn't really...get it.
Where were you for all those moments
when I was desperate-needing you-sad?This does not sound good, and is best to be rephrased.

You failed your only task
and I have the privilege of suffering.
How could you be so selfish?
My rage is sweltering.

I needed you then
I don't need you now;
You're a stranger to me,
yet familiar somehow.

We get one chance in life
as fair as it may be.
Why you toyed with my heart
will always be a mystery.

I've roughed it on my own,
You can't recognize these scars;
Don't expect to come back
When you've made yourself so far.

I don't think I'll miss you,
I don't really know who "you" are;
I don't care what happens,
This is quite bizarre This last line does not fit well, and it sounds like you struggled to make a rhyme.

Have a safe trip down.

This is a really good poem, I enjoyed it a lot, though it's a depressing matter. I just have a few questions about the wording I wanted to bring to attention:

when I was desperately-needing you-sad?

This is quite bizarre

I don't know what brought you to write this poem, but I am touched and impressed.
The rhyming was great and the words emotionally moving.
I truly enjoyed your poem, but I think it should be in lyric poetry, but i could be wrong.
Keep writing.