shima

This is quite good. I liked it. It is sad, lonely, painful and totally not in the holiday spirit...which just makes it even more awesome. I can feel the pain ...

It is nice. Cool to see a story set in such an unusual time-period, seeing how not a lot of people take Ancient Greece as their point of departure. Not ...

Nice. It is a bit short, for my taste, but I like it. It is very dry, I have to tell you that. It isn't dry in the fact that ...

So...getting to chapter two...story is finally taking shape, I guess. Got one question though - this apparently ain't a proper magic universe, more like an urban-fantasy type of deal, right? ...

Yeah, it's me here. Sorry for the delay - lotsa stuff to do. So I read your little story and I liked it. What else can I say - it ...

Yeah, Mikhail here. Sorry it took so long, was very busy with stuff. What can I say about your story ? This was very off. I don't know what the ...

Shima here once more, ready for a review. Once again - this is fantastic. Great stuff. The introduction of two extra characters didn't feel rushed or forced, which is always ...

Okay, Shima here, ready to do some reviewing. First of all - this was long. It can also be my personal thing but this was actually the longest story of ...

Oh cool, I am the first reviewer. Groovy. Well, what can I say ? Still enjoying the heck out of it, great story as always. The descriptions were really nice ...

Mikhail here. Returning to next chapter, since I am actually curious how the story will end. Believe it or not, it is very difficult to do with a person like ...

Funny and very fitting for valentine. Loved the rhyming, btw. Loved the darker bits, about how some parts should be forced if they do not fit naturally (stalking much ? ...

Okay. Just okay. Beautiful, if not a bit fetishizing (but it is Deadpool we're talking about. If anyone should be fetishized it is him). I liked the way you described ...

Can I start with something completely out of the blue ? What is up with all of these weird names ? I know a couple of things about english naming ...

Well, since I wrote a review on the first chapter it would be my duty to review the other two chapters as well. This one was even better than the ...

Well, writing a review, as asked. My first thought (yesterday, not today) was that this was more than a little confusing. I guess that was because I was very tired. ...