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Hey there! Shey here for a review! Okay, I've never been much to commenting on storylines, as I usually review poetry. Instead, I'll comment on alternative key parts of writing ...

Hey there! Shey here for a review! Let me start by getting out my Robin costume and exclaiming "Holy description, Batman!" Your description throughout this piece was both magnificent and ...

Hey there! Shey here for a review! I see below that BlueAfrica already went through and commented on each part of the piece, but I figure I should talk about ...

Hey there! Shey here for a review! So you've got four chapters here. I understand why, because why waste more points, but it's still weird. It makes reading it odd, ...

Hey there! Shey here for a review! I was reading through some poetry when I saw this, and I had to review it. I see you've already gotten a few ...

Hey there! Shey here for a review! Do you know how good this is? This is amazing! I can tell you really are nearly ready to sent it to an ...

Hey there! Shey here for a review! I can tell you have the makings of a great story here, and I look forward to reading more! Below I've got a ...

Hey there! Shey here for a review! Okay, so first. I haven't read the first chapter. I did understand most of everything going on because you did a good job ...

Hey there, Saru! Happy Review Day! (I'm writing this technically before RD starts but by the time I finish it should have started) I'm gonna jump right into this with ...

Hey there! Shey here for a super short review! Basically I have only one comment... I didn't intend to review anything right now, but I read this and wanted to ...

Hey there, Lupa! Shey here for a review! I have to say, this was a great poem. I'm gonna come across as harsh and picky, but keep in mind I ...

Hey there! Shey here for a review! Over the course of the 8 months I've been on this site, I've never read a poem on here out loud. But I ...

Hey there! Shey here for a review! This is honestly one of the best pieces I've ever read. I can say so with certainty. The formatting was perfect, the narrator ...

Hey, Saru! (yes, I'm calling you that now) Shey here for a review! Overall, dang, this was a deep piece, but I really liked it. I've got a couple of ...

Hey there! Shey here for a review! I really enjoyed this piece of poetry. It deals with the darker parts of life, but it's deep, so I found it enjoyable. ...