sherineahmed

well, i have to say although i get the spirit in which you wrote this poem, that your grammar needs some work. i have to say i make a lot ...

i liked how you expressed how you saw valentine's day. you showed us what you thought about, your worries,.... this gives your poem a personal tough that every body love ...

i totally agree So you made me feel like I was reading about myself :) I like it. It touched a soft spot for me. I think if you worked ...

i think you did a great job. i seriously like this part: "Natalie nodded to the driver and closed her door. The taxi veered back into the main flow of ...

i agree with what is said from others about this Just so you know, I haven't read Barker, so if any of my comments imply confusion because of that, I'm ...

That was great. I wish you luck with the contest. I like the idea of chooseing a qoute instead of being given a sertain topic. It makes it possible for ...

oh my god!!!!! you are amazinggggg i was reviewing other songs and then i came across yours you are so tallented!!! i loooove it can you pleaaase enable downloading becouase ...

I should’ve been an actress I should’ve been a star I could do something with my life I could’ve gone far I could’ve gone places But instead I stayed ‘Because ...

hi, first of all i would like to say that the lyrics are full of music, they flow and fit together. i personally think you should make your song a ...

all what can i say is excellent work i loved this part most I gasped. The sudden remembrances that there were no happy endings in this story came rushing back ...

i couldn't agree more..... Hiya, I really like this poem!!! You've got a really interesting style of writing, this poem is really vivid. I kind of read it, and really ...

Hero’s pulse galloped in her throat as she handed her ticket to the prom to a parent waiting outside of the ballroom. She hastily checked the faces of every adult ...

Hi, First, i would like to say that was really good for a first try. You tried to improve your story writing skills in fantasy : Thanks for your honesty ...