Published February 15, 2011
I'm not the kind of person that writes all lovey dovey... but I wrote this Iambic Pentameter sonnet for an assignment and felt like I should share it.
Just as I woke up
I was still nervous
Poured myself a cup
and thought about us
It's valentine's day
Love is in the air
Just floating away
Giggles everywhere
Some People sour
And some People sweet
Hours and hours
It's a real treat
Infatuation
Without a question
comment!
Happy Valentines day!
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That was really good, glad you put it up!
i liked how you expressed how you saw valentine's day. you showed us what you thought about, your worries,.... this gives your poem a personal tough that every body love but i think this can be explained a little
this is my only remark. great work thoughit is really sweet!!!! I love your poem!! glad you published it!!:D