shayspeare

I could've laughed so hard. This poem was so bizarre in a good way. So this poem was short, witty, and about barfing. I can say I wish I had ...

Hi. I'm Shay. I will be reviewing this poem. This poem is beautifully tragic. The effects of abuse, specifically in a romantic relationship and being used, have come alive. Cheating ...

Hello, I'm Shay. I'm going to review your poem. It has a very fantasy-esque tone. It's magical how you use phrase like "tears of glass and stardust," "starlit mask," "moonbeams ...

Wow. This was very philosophical. I liked the repetition of the words sometimes, lie, truth, death, and life. I like where this is going. It's very interactive with the audience, ...

Hello. I enjoyed your poem. It was very creepy, if that's what you were aiming for. The creepy tone is first set off with all of the gerunds you use. ...

This doesn't feel like a poem. I like it. But it's more descriptive and long. It doesn't really have a rhythmic scheme or a rhyme scheme. I still like it, ...

Hi GrymmRipper, I must say this poem has so much potential. Your vocabulary, to start, is very educated. I've never seen a poem using the words "prodigal son[s]". And it ...

This was a good chapter. You have much potential I will say. However, there are a few things I would like to point out. The bullying part of the scene ...

Hi. I'm Shay, and I loved your poem. I could say that this might be epic poetry, or at least extended poetry because it's very long. As thegoldenbird wrote, people ...

I love this poem. It's short. It's sad. I also love the tone you convey. The refrain from capitalization in most of the lines gives us a sense of hopelessness ...

This was much better than the second chapter. This was amazing. There were still moments when you seemed to switch POV, but that was at the beginning. Overall, I seemed ...

Is this a poem? This feels like an epic poem. And by that, I don't mean Epic, as in Sophocles and Homer, but it feels like it's not a poem, ...

Great poem. I will say that you have a lot of wit with your choice of sound-based rhymes that have mild similarities. Although it did confuse me how why you ...

Wow. This poem was amazing. As a narrative poem, it's long, full of imagery. The tone, was just -- wow. It consumed all of my emotions and left me sad. ...

Here I am again. I just read this, and I'm glad to be the first person to review this. I will mention that some of the dialogue left me confused ...