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Hi, I'm Shay. I will review your poem. It's very beautiful. I love how you use the word "laps" in the first line. It's very technical. Good job. The pause ...

I have to say wow. This looks amazing. You're an amazing drawer. It's so realistic. It's better than anything I could produce, although I will mention that you seemed to ...

Hi. I'm Shay. First off, I would like to say. You wrote this beautifully. I think it epitomizes the melancholy of the world's current situation perfectly. I like that you ...

I like this. This was very well-written. A bit long, but never mind. It was captivating. The pacing was well done. I like how you used third person, and it ...

I like this romantic vibe you're giving. Or at least friendly vibe you're exuding between Taylor and Ryan. I like that it started out at camp. Not a lot of ...

This was a good, well-paced chapter The length was perfect. The grammar was perfect aside from a few comma misplacements. I even liked how you added a few dialectal words ...

I like how you finished this short story. Yes, it was sad, but it was a literary perfection. I love how you incorporated the letters exchanged. Question: did you make ...

Wow. This should really be read by others. This is as realistic as it gets today with the world being on lockdown and stuff, so this should be relatable and ...

Okay. I have not read the earlier portions, but I will. I'm going to do this just to help you get out of the green room. I like this. The ...

Hi. I'm Shay. You have an amazing writing style. I will give you that. But the repetition of the floor and notes about it are a bit redundant. That's my ...

Okay. I'm back. It's Shay, again. I will start off by reminding you to lengthen out the action and work on capturing more imagery, etc, but this time, I will ...

Hi. Shay, here. I'm gonna review this. You have such amazing grammar. I will also point out that your imagery is amazing too. You have an amazing sense of vocabulary ...

I agree with Bhavya. This is heartbreaking. I'm assuming this was a very possessive and toxic relationship. But still, I can't believe someone would be that self-centered. I also see ...

Hi. I must start off with a firm warning. You do realize there's a movie and book entitled "Mirror, Mirror," am I correct? And I will add, it too is ...

Hi. I'm Shay. This was amazing. It seemed realistic. The formatting, I will say, was quite outstanding in that it was insightful, deep, and not the typical kind of conversation ...