sharitm2

This is a really great piece and i loved you're description. I also really appreciate the fact that you didn't make you're character, Lily, perfect. She was flawed, which made ...

Aww this is SO cute an i absolutely love it! Keep up the good work, and I'd really love to read the expanded version of this. ~Sharitm2

I really liked this piece, but I feel as if it's all happening too fast, especially towards the end. i didn't completely understood what happened towards the end. I think ...

This piece is really good and I really liked it. (: I also like the way you described the flash back, although I had to read it twice before I ...

Hi there, I just wanted to say I REALLY liked this piece of poetry! It's short, simple and descriptive. I love the imagery and you're use of punctuation. To be ...

Your description in this piece was amazing. The way you depicted the emotion of loneliness was so great that I felt as if I was the character feeling those feelings. ...

There were a few spelling errors but otherwise, you did a great job with the story. I love the description and the way you described everything. Keep writing! -Sharie

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You did an amazing job with this! I love the story line, and you didn't have any grammatical errors. I really couldn't find anything wrong with it. Something I usually ...

I love this poem. I can definitely relate to it, and as MoonlightMayhem said, it would sound amazing as a song. Keep writing (:

Hey there, I really loved this poem and how descriptive it was. The images that you had running through my head were very clear. There's only one part that detached ...

Hi, Great poem! I absolutely love depressing poetry about love and life in general and this poem really enchanted me (: One thing was that you fell of track with ...