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Hello. First of all, "so then why can't I?" It would sound better with just "so why can't I?" Another thing, I can't feel anything from your poem. The genre ...

Hello... Okay, I'm sorry for not lying, but, the punctuation needs to be legit along with the capitalization of words. Sorry, but, this is a review. Ignoring all the punctuation- ...

Hello.... I love the poem and I'm going to stalk your works. The opening lines are very maudlin and create a refreshing start to the poem. The vocabulary is pretty ...

Hello....*waves with a smile* "The answer is in the firehorse of our lungs, the below bellows of something that yells unknown into the empty" Are you referring to our conscience ...

Hey... *waves with a goofy grin* "I'd finally be free! ~ Well, maybe." Let's hope you don't become a domestic dog... if you ever become one. The poem was light-hearted ...

Hey.... *waves with a broad grin* Very lyrical, very melancholic, very nostalgic, very maudlin, very touching, very romantic and very graceful. Even in its subtlety, it's a punch to the ...

Hello... *waves with a smile* "Imperfection is the most human aspect of all humanity." If you ever become a well-known writer in the future and this is the quote of ...

Hey "One moment touching the divines, when we succumb to our hearts. A second of raw emotion, and our souls simply unravel." Where do you get such lyricism? This stanza ...

Hey! To be truthful, I had to read your poem a couple of times to understand its intent and from what I understood, this poem has a very taunting message. ...

Hey.... *waves hand vigorously* I really liked the story and the neutrality of it. There a balance of two opinions depicted in this story which is really soothing. To be ...

Hello. The poem reflects the conflict between two halves integral of one thing. The imagery that I get in my mind, is the black and white of yin and yang ...

The usage of glasses as a simile is just so innovative and refreshing. What I truly like about your poem is that, it makes the reader come to a conclusion: ...

Hey Scribble! Great work with the suspense and the description. 'Sometimes I feel cold, chapped fingers brushing over my tightly closed eyelids. It whispers to me too. "Let me in...".' ...

Hey....ElectraSecret. I don't really know if I like or dislike your work, but, I'm definitely intrigued by the 'root' of it. It makes me wonder about the reasons that have ...

Hello Scribble! "Just fuck off; go away, because your words, are just too cliché." These lines startled me and intrigued me simultaneously... Just saying. The poem has two main emotions ...