shanan-cat

Nice title! Good work! He wasn't only a man He was my man I don't think that this was a good opening sentence. It didn't really catch too much of ...

I like the idea, but it's a bit cliché, a lot of people use these kind of stories and now it's getting kind of old. You also forgot to capitilize ...

Hi again! Just Close Your Eyes Just close your eyes I don't like the fact that you repeated the line. it bothers me a lot! Change it. To see the ...

I like the way you think, the way you have good rhyming skills and the way you choose precise words to make the reader feel what you want to feel. ...

It was good but I thought that it was kinda short... you should have made it longer. It had nice originality and the layout was exceptional... it was GREAT actually! ...

Camille! During math? Why did I never get to read it? And the answer to all your questions are "yes". I think that it has a lot if originality to ...

I had a few problems with your poetry: That's it! I can't take it no more I hate it... here I want to leave right now! No one come close ...

Hi! It's me again. I just wanted to say a few things: [quote] Moonlight creeps over the horizon. Darkness evokes all that is bright. I linger into the shadows, to ...

I really liked this one! I’m holding back on what’s killing me. For I know what is to be. I loved this stanza! It really makes you get the fact ...

Hi! I think that you missed some of the supposed to be capitilised "i"'s. [quote]And to think! I was to plan our wedding day! I don't think that there's a ...

Hey again! Read your last post and I thought it was terrific! Just like this one! It was amazing what you did with the characters and the being diagnosed... WOW! ...

Hi! You knew? Me too. I really liked your story, it had real nice originality to it and I liked the setting and story line too. Your not bad. You ...

Hi! Haven't seen you cool monkey swing the smooth branch in along time! O.k, now to the review... I liked the way you put the story into a diary and ...

The literature door swung open and a heart shaped woman with long black hair, tall slender frame and small breasts. This line doesn't make sense because you said it without ...

I'm sorry, but it wasn't very good and I think it was toooooo much spacing. Also, you should ahve continued it and had put more sentences instead of alot of ...