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loved the use of paradox and contrast in this poem! perfectly titled, life consists of alot of random inexplicable moments that don't really fit into any sort of moral or ...

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loved the use of paradox and contrast in this poem! perfectly titled, life consists of alot of random inexplicable moments that don't really fit into any sort of moral or ...

Very powerful piece! I love the way you speak of mans internalization of social ideals to the point that his own physical autonomy comes into question. raises very important questions ...

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Very evocative. I felt your pain with each passing line, as well as faint undertones of hope and promise beneath the obvious themes of despair and lost love. Well done

Very evocative. I felt your pain with each passing line, as well as faint undertones of hope and promise beneath the obvious themes of despair and lost love. Well done

I connected with this profoundly. Beautiful peace and a wonderful depiction of a dispirited life. Well done! Keep writing

Thanks for the feedback. Didn't really think it was nessesary to open the comment with "this is really not that great" but i appreciate it nonetheless. As for the paragraph ...

Love the fact that you have come to terms with the darkness within! great write

I love everything about this! the way aesthetics override sincere passion in current day romance. How you felt discarded and are questioning weather the relationship was one sided with the ...

Very honest! and despite the piece being so concise it summerzied the point beautifully. well done.

I actually really enjoyed this piece! very evocative and dark, it kept me captivated until the very end, great writing goo job.

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I actually really enjoyed this piece! very evocative and dark, it kept me captivated until the very end, great writing goo job.

such a beautifully written piece! very evocative! keep writing