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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Ocean's Call

    Ignis, I can't believe I didn't notice this... =( I remember this in class... I honestly thought it was AMAZING, but I'm just going to critique your... Presentation =P Okay, ...

    Sat Oct 01, 2011 11:37 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: My Green Tea Latte - Chapter 1

    I enjoyed reading this =) I think you did very well capturing the emotion in this piece and made me very interested in Rosy. It the way you have written ...

    Wed Sep 14, 2011 7:52 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: My Green Tea Latte - Prologue

    Well, I read the wall post and decided I'd check this out =) I thought this was really cute and a great way to start something off. To me, the ...

    Mon Sep 12, 2011 6:18 am
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Just a Stereotypical Teenager

    I'm going to go with hopeispeace here and say that I can relate to this piece. I've written a lot of these emails before and I'd just like to say ...

    Tue Aug 09, 2011 9:49 am
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: The Sorting Hat

    I have to agree that it did seem... short. I felt like it ended abruptly. Well, maybe not so much abruptly, more like it went by very quickly and I ...

    Fri Jul 29, 2011 8:43 am
  • Short Story » General, General Re: She's Going To Be A Model

    I loved this story. It was one of those stories that kept me engaged despite my short attention span =P The story flowed very well. I liked how you used ...

    Fri Jul 29, 2011 8:18 am
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Forgetful

    I have to agree. I REALLY enjoyed reading this =) I loved the way you used repetition. it worked so well for this piece =) I felt that it flowed ...

    Fri Jul 22, 2011 6:51 am
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Letters *Edited*

    This story really touched me. Now, I COULD go into some nit-picks at this point, but I wont, not just because I hate nit-picking online, but because frankly, it didn't ...

    Mon May 30, 2011 3:59 am
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The UnBible: The New Testament: The Book of Luke

    I liked this story. I found it quite interesting, but then again, it's a Bible and a love story, so how could it not be to me? =P However, there ...

    Sun May 29, 2011 1:00 am
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Hey, Boy!

    I enjoyed this. Yes, it was short. Yes, it was quite simple, but somehow, it caught my attention in a different way to other works out there. I do think ...

    Sun May 29, 2011 12:38 am
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Only You

    Well, I'm not much of a poet (or perhaps not even one), but I thought this was cute and your friend sounds very sweet. I'm not so sure what the ...

    Thu Apr 28, 2011 7:06 am
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Babel

    I enjoyed reading this. I love how the project is dubbed 'Babel', being a 'religious freak' to the extent of reading a children's picture Bible several times because each page ...

    Sun Apr 10, 2011 4:15 am
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Do not click this.

    I loved this poem =) Of course, the title meant that I just HAD to click on it. Very entertaining =) I should've seen that poem coming from the title. ...

    Sun Apr 10, 2011 4:01 am
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Bang Bang!

    I love these lyrics :D It definitely sounds like something I would listen to. I'm probably not the best person to review lyrics (I spend a lot of time on ...

    Sun Apr 10, 2011 3:48 am
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Friday

    This honestly reminds me of Rebecca Black. This isn't to say that you remind me of her, I just feel like it's an homage to her appreciation of Fridays. So ...

    Sun Apr 10, 2011 3:35 am


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