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Bang Bang!

by dregymayfield


I see the sirens through the window
Got to get a message to the people
about this rage
in a cage
kind of stage
That I seem to be dwelling in
Don't fucking move hostage number ten
because the pigs are ready for the negotiation procedure to expire
Little do they know I'm about to open fire

~Chorus~
Bang, bang!
comes the sound when I have to make a point
Bang, bang!
is how I feel when I'm all up in this joint
Bang, bang!
Doesn't matter about your creed, sex preference, or race
Bang, bang!
So get the hell out of my face

Listen, I already shot one fuck in the head
You didn't listen to what I said
You thought I was just talking big
but now for this poor bastard a grave is what you'll dig
Statistics will prove that it's just a thousand out of a million people murdered today
But precisely how many of those roles did the government play
Now I still have nine
You're running out of time

(chorus)

It's now, evidently, crystal clear that I'm not playing fucking games
too much thoughts in motion so I'll have to retain
You ask me what it is I want
What don't I want?
There's a very distinction between what you want and what you get
So to know at this single moment out of a million possible things to want is very difficult, isn't it?
Oh...there just went another one
Are you having any fun?

(chorus)

Hold it, a thought just came into my mind
Out of all the chaos that guns bring
there's a simpler way to save live's and time
Why the fuck am I wasting all of these bullets from this gun
When all I really need is just one

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Sun Apr 10, 2011 3:48 am
senseiawesome wrote a review...



I love these lyrics :D
It definitely sounds like something I would listen to.

I'm probably not the best person to review lyrics (I spend a lot of time on here, but usually end up not reviewing because I can never figure out what to say). However, something makes me feel inclined feel that 'Get the hell out of my face' is the name of the song.

I'm not sure if you intended this to be an extended metaphor, but it really feels like one to me (as well as reflecting on how society is very closed-minded on everything -.- And violent. Society is violent.)

Basically, what I get out is this song is the idea that there are people in the world suffering because people don't consider anything before it's too late, even when there was enough warning prior to the realisation.

The extended metaphor I saw in this was being one person up against the world and how a single person can feel so alone, so rejected and so ignored and people still refuse to listen and how each bullet, person murdered and game they are wound up in is just one way they have tried to share their voice and it has been shot down (no pun intended).

I don't really have anything you can improve on. As I said, I'm not really one for reviews =P
I just thought I'd share my opinion on this and what I thought of it because it really is an awesome song =)





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