Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
Anyway let's get right to it,
Once, I daydreamed like many other girls that I would find Mr Right.
But I was wrong, I had found Mr Perfect.
The only problem was, he didn’t like me.
In fact, he hated me.
You might want to ask who this person is.
Then listen to me. Please do.
This is my story,my life…my cup of green tea latte.
Well, this is a rather poetic sounding prologue here, with the way that you've formatted things here, it could honestly pass for both a poem about finding the perfect guy and also a prologue to a story about this whole conundrum being laid out here. It certainly manages to catch the reader's interest here with the problem being laid out as it is and how everything seems to somehow be tied to this one latte, that definitely raises quite a few questions here.
If I really dive into this, it sound like this girl appears to have been looking for someone she felt was right for her, and ended up finding someone who was somehow nearly perfect but said person probably ignores her for some reason which does sound like you could built quite a plot around it if you managed to give it an unique enough spin on things.
Overall, for a prologue that's as short and sweet as this one is, you really do manage to create quite a powerful effect here and it does make you want to find out more as a reader.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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