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Hey Ashley! Sorry this review took so long! I've been out of the country for a while so I haven't had much access to a computer. I couldn't do line ...

Hey Greenjay! I'm scasha! here's my crit key: Red = Comments Bold = Words I've inserted Footsteps echoed throughout the quiet halls, reverberating through open chambers and vast hollows. Nothing ...

Hey Salsashanno! I'm scasha! Here's my crit key:Red = Comments Bold = Words I've inserted that I think work better. Reviews are greatly appreciated. What do you think, too long? ...

Hey Sorsha! Your post looked lonley, so I decided to crit it! I apologize, since I haven't read the previous chapters, but I'll do my best to review this. My ...

Hey LetsPaintTheTown! Welcome to YWS! I'm scasha! My review key is as follows: red = comments bold = words I've inserted that I think work better. Let's do this thing! ...

Hey Careless! Let's see what you got!! Morning, Penny decides, is no time to concentrate on walking attractively. Anyone who might raise an eyebrow over an eight o’clock waddle clearly ...

Hey Ygaron! here's my crit key: Red = Comments Bold = Words I've inserted that I think work better. let's do this thing! In the cold, dark alley, a small ...

I loved this book too! Did you get to read the sequel? The barcode Revolution (I think that's the name). I got my sister to read it. I love books ...

Hey Ashley! I'm so happy you put out this chapter! Anyway, here is my crit! Hope it helped. Okay, I know that it has been a long time since I ...

Hey ashley! I've reserved this spot for me, I'll comment/review this prologue after I get back from dropping my little sister off at summer school. Are you thinking of continuing ...

Hey onceuponatim3! Since you've been critting my The Duty stuff which I really appreciate, I decided to give this another look. Let's see how your edits went :-) So, if ...

Hey Talking Pinata! Let's see what you have in store for us. Same crit key as always! The half moon hung in the sky like some great celestial yin-yang. Four ...

Hey again! Let's see what you got! All right...I need harsh critiques now because this is my first love scene (kind of) in my story, so I need peoples' honest ...

Hey again ashley! Here's my crit! I hope it helps! Sorry it took so long :-) Sorry it took me so long to put this on here...I've been SUPER busy! ...

Hey Pawprint! I'm Scasha! Anyway here's my review crit: Red = Comments Bold = words I've inserted that I think work better with your piece. Let's do this thing. Chapter ...