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  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: Pause

    this poem has a good meaning. i really appreciate it but what i find was that you are lost in your own words that is many descriptions situations memories and ...

    Sep 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: The Other Girl

    SO HERE YOU ARE THE OTHER GIRL BETWEEN THE COUPLE. I LKIE THE THEME which seems lke a monologue from the side of the other girl who also loves the ...

    Sep 18, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Satire Re: Shaving

    Though the titile does not well comprehend the theme of the poem yet i like the theme alot.really goal should be rightly set.however i myself am a aimless man.the starting ...

    Sep 12, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Historical Fiction Re: Paint me my colours

    This poemis good but gives a blur conception about the poem.the first four lined has a good rythmwhich ilike then i feel you have usef the mediim of colors to ...

    Sep 6, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: The train of separation.

    I found the story very idiotic first the sentence consruction is wrongthe sentences r incompleye.plz comleye It.then i wpuld like to tell u thatthemid part is too lengthy and too ...

    Sep 4, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Battle Has Begun

    I like the poem specially that partwhich sid about the inferiority ad superiority. U revele thr fact aboutlife.u called the sodiers s preyender u reveled the truth becaise i kow ...

    Sep 4, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: imperfection

    I love this story alotthough i cannotunderstand that why u said it a story as it isa philosaphical noteor a article.ifu have used it an rhyming scheme then itcould have ...

    Sep 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Colors

    I really love this poem.first of it tells about the colors of life and their presence and meaning to one.the thingis that i hate when some oneasks me anything abput ...

    Sep 3, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Our World

    this is a freindship day special poem. am i right.the poem is good and narrates well the times with freinds that we cherish aii through our life. my bff changed ...

    Jul 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Satire Re: Twos

    this this poem about duplicity among a peolpe which had made him appeaer two in one being. or this is telling about the ups and downs in life two times ...

    Jul 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Romantic Re: Nothing's Enough

    this is a good poem and ties love with the art of poetry as well as with the human soul. i lke the way you you described the love glance ...

    Jul 26, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Solider

    the poem is a very good poem. this is like a ballad you narrated a story through the poem. you said about the weather then started telling about the battlefield. ...

    Jul 19, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Helium

    its an ausome poem. i love it. the remarkable thing of the poem is that it tells about freedom not only freedom of body but also freedom of thought and ...

    Jul 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Satire Re: A Pathetic Piece of Writing

    this poem is good but rhyme does not mean that using a mword two times. he poem does not require any writers introduction of the poem ax that is what ...

    Jul 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Blood Runs Cold

    what is this. if you dont wish to write do not write or publish anything as vague as this . while thinking the name u used ur brain and with ...

    Jul 5, 2015


"In my contact with people I find that, as a rule, it is only the little, narrow people who live for themselves, who never read good books, who do not travel, who never open up their souls in a way to permit them to come into contact with other souls -- with the great outside world."
— Booker T. Washington, Up From Slavery