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Re: Pause
this poem has a good meaning. i really appreciate it but what i find was that you are lost in your own words that is many descriptions situations memories and ...
Sep 26, 2015 -
Re: The Other Girl
SO HERE YOU ARE THE OTHER GIRL BETWEEN THE COUPLE. I LKIE THE THEME which seems lke a monologue from the side of the other girl who also loves the ...
Sep 18, 2015 -
Re: Shaving
Though the titile does not well comprehend the theme of the poem yet i like the theme alot.really goal should be rightly set.however i myself am a aimless man.the starting ...
Sep 12, 2015 -
Re: Paint me my colours
This poemis good but gives a blur conception about the poem.the first four lined has a good rythmwhich ilike then i feel you have usef the mediim of colors to ...
Sep 6, 2015 -
Re: The train of separation.
I found the story very idiotic first the sentence consruction is wrongthe sentences r incompleye.plz comleye It.then i wpuld like to tell u thatthemid part is too lengthy and too ...
Sep 4, 2015 -
Re: The Battle Has Begun
I like the poem specially that partwhich sid about the inferiority ad superiority. U revele thr fact aboutlife.u called the sodiers s preyender u reveled the truth becaise i kow ...
Sep 4, 2015 -
Re: imperfection
I love this story alotthough i cannotunderstand that why u said it a story as it isa philosaphical noteor a article.ifu have used it an rhyming scheme then itcould have ...
Sep 3, 2015 -
Re: Colors
I really love this poem.first of it tells about the colors of life and their presence and meaning to one.the thingis that i hate when some oneasks me anything abput ...
Sep 3, 2015 -
Re: Our World
this is a freindship day special poem. am i right.the poem is good and narrates well the times with freinds that we cherish aii through our life. my bff changed ...
Jul 27, 2015 -
Re: Twos
this this poem about duplicity among a peolpe which had made him appeaer two in one being. or this is telling about the ups and downs in life two times ...
Jul 27, 2015 -
Re: Nothing's Enough
this is a good poem and ties love with the art of poetry as well as with the human soul. i lke the way you you described the love glance ...
Jul 26, 2015 -
Re: Solider
the poem is a very good poem. this is like a ballad you narrated a story through the poem. you said about the weather then started telling about the battlefield. ...
Jul 19, 2015 -
Re: Helium
its an ausome poem. i love it. the remarkable thing of the poem is that it tells about freedom not only freedom of body but also freedom of thought and ...
Jul 8, 2015 -
Re: A Pathetic Piece of Writing
this poem is good but rhyme does not mean that using a mword two times. he poem does not require any writers introduction of the poem ax that is what ...
Jul 8, 2015 -
Re: Blood Runs Cold
what is this. if you dont wish to write do not write or publish anything as vague as this . while thinking the name u used ur brain and with ...
Jul 5, 2015
