sagnik

Firstly this is your first poem that I have i scroll down to see the titles of ur other works i find that it seems that all your works debate ...

FIRSTLY in the matters of creating the intense atmosphere n surprising the reader u have succeeded. However I AM 19+ and find this short story too violent at least the ...

so so there's a conflict between peace n ocd in the poem .The reference of stars n constellations keep on recurring themselves time to time as they represent everything harmonious ...

this poem is a light mood poem which says abt the immature love probably that which exist between teenagers .This poem is very sweet and is successful in capturing what ...

The poem descries the loss of the men at the battlefield in such a beautiful way.The soldiers r errect arrayed n disciplined like the trees in woods but just like ...

The only word i have is beautiful for this poem.I could picturize a girl with a pink doll and blond braided hair running helter skelter untill she grows to be ...

very interesting way of story telling.REALLY NOTEWORTHY piece of writing.I was subjected to the awe curiosity bewilderment and thrill which the author wanted while I was going through the text.I ...

A tragic poem which dissects te soul of a deceived or deluded lover. There's rain in the background that though mostly accepted as a romantic period here is the symbol ...

The poem narrates the birth of carnal desire in the narrators mind and all thoughts so triggered after it.I love the fact that there's no forcing rather the fear of ...

This poem is somting which I TRULY bELEIVE .i think no mortal man can evr be so perfect as at first t appears to be and this illusionary perfectness which ...

Its a good poem where you speak about a cyclic process by personifying the pedal magnificiently and then using the scheme of similie toshow it similar to you.The intense love ...

I like the way u ve narrated the seasons they r quite sweet but u should ge also include other seasons as summmerrainy perhaps in ur nation such seasons never ...

I love the poem it says so very much using just a few wordss.thecedpression as the blue jade mountain are lovely.nnext the end which sayys that u cannot loose her ...

this poem is very good and like my poem love or lust betrayal or trust. please read it if you please. i like he way you narrated the whole poem ...

this poem is intense first of it the poem if meade to scare or give a dirty sensaton then it is compltely sucessful. the poem is horror or philosahical that ...