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I really like this piece, beastly. The sentence here is fragmentary. You can incorporate them into one sentence. I really loved these sentences: He glared at me before I grabbed ...

I feel like this is more of a prompt than a short story. You could expand on it by adding details such as describing the room. Who is "everyone"? You ...

Alright. So this really needs help from the Enter key. Your chapters are wildly organized. You need to make some spaces for them to breathe. aybe putting something to clear ...

I understand that this is just a taping, but I think it would be better of you added some meat to it.I really liked this. It struck really deep for ...

This story has no plot, and therefore cannot be judged as a story. It seems like a diary entry more than anything else, because it describes the feelings a person ...

Hey Noelle I really liked this story.I loved the way the mirror has a voice, and how its the mirror that has taught her to see herself as was awesome, ...

This is a great poem. This is a great poem. I like it. the grammar sound good but needs more imformational stuff things that you need to add on here ...

OK so just a few issues: I like to see more character.I'd also like to see more details and visuals. Everything is announced and told.confusing an example of what I ...

I like your story line to, but need more details.I cant picture nothing in my head.I like to be able to picture it,But other then that. It's a great story;) ...

I like your story line to, but need more details.I cant picture nothing in my head.I like to be able to picture it,But other then that. It's a great story;) ...

"AWESOME" Slender story it's freaky, but im not afraid. This story is all good. I bet you will be a great horror storyteller. I very much enjoyed reading this. Thanks ...

I'm reviewing this I like how you start off(Seven children sat in a meadow. It wasn%u2019t much, the meadow. It was grass and dirt backed by a rusty, collapsing chain ...

RWG HERE going to review this this story makes sense i like when you say "My brain is blown with mad suggestions as the bloody corpse of my fiancé lies ...

This story sets off at (First there was a house. Then there was a boy. And then came the accident.) That's sound good and every thing that you did here ...