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Hey. Runawaylove here to review your poem! First of all, I prefer plain black text with font size 10 or 11. Italics should be used only to emphasize a word, ...

Hey. Runawaylove her to review your story! First off, this story was interesting but also typical. I mean I have read dozens of stories like this with a vampire and ...

This was a nice piece. It's beautifully written and i could connect to it the way I could to your previous writing. This is actually a different way of telling ...

hey! Runawaylove here to review your work :) First off this is not actually a story. It feels more like reading a page from the middle of a book. I ...

Hey! Runawaylove here to review your work :) This story made me nostalgic. You have successfully described everything a girl feels when her heart is broken. Some people say that ...

ok. So you have an interesting story coming up. I really like love stories that start from the very begging the way this one did. I love Gretchen's character. To ...

Hey! Runawaylove here to review :) Firstly, this is a very inspirational poem. Good job on that. I usually like poems that rhyme and you have done a remarkable job ...

Hey! Runawaylove here to review your work :) First of all beautiful beginning. It was the best part of your story. The whole story really reached out to me and ...

I have three words for this story-Creepy, disgusting and awesome. I love this story because of the way you have written it and with the ease Charles talks about all ...

Hello! Runawaylove here to review. :) The title was catchy, good choice. I love the rhyming scheme and i really appreciate a poem that rhymes. Your poem is gripping. I ...

Alright. First of all, the colours of the words. They are very distracting. You used blue on pink on all the lines except the first and fourth one. This makes ...

ok... WOW... Now that is a beautifully written story. I love all the descriptions and the way you've written it. Its intriguing and captivating. The title is really catchy. The ...

I am a feminist so anything written about a woman being strong and free will be appreciated by me. "As silent as an ant, working hard and hard, aiming to ...

OK, now that is one awesome story. The title is what got me in the first place. I could really connect to Ashley as the character is so realistic. Although ...

One of the most creepiest stories I've ever read. The beginning was intriguing. And I found myself getting more hooked after I read every sentence. So there I was, feeling ...