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Hello JadeBunny. I'm here, doing some reviewing for R.E.D. Wow. This was a very, very short work but thanks for making this so simple and easy for me to review! ...

Hello, felistia! I am, as you can see, here to review. I have not read any of your previous chapters and just jumped straight into this, so I am a ...

Hello, Shima! I'm going to jump right in, reviewing this thing... Wait. Never mind. First, let me say what I liked. The beginning and ending sentences totally and completely entranced ...

Hello Lady, I hope you are doing well. This was quite an interesting poem and I will admit, I re-read it about 23 times. Overall, in my opinion, the rhyme ...

Hello Dest! I'm sure you remember me by now so I'm not going to get all gushy or weird or whatever. A Few Thoughts 1. Curi has a job. Okay, ...

Aaaand....she's back for more! (geez louise, i feel like i'm the only person reviewing this story!) But whateves...on to the good stuff: The story, I've noticed, is taking more shape. ...

Hello Dest! I am back again! (wait. did you just groan?) :P (kidding, kidding) Alright, so another chapter of the Dreaded Dinner Party is in session and I am here ...

Heya Rosy! :) (Just here to - hopefully - quickly review this). I'll start with the grammar/punctuation: A couple of your sentences in the beginning, I noticed, had no space ...

Hello Dest! I see you're new here so Welcome! to the YWS. The title of this story caught me right away because Dinner Parties are amazing and always mean food ...

Hello Rurouni, hope you're doing grand! Before I do any reviewing I must say this: I absolutely LOVE your descriptions of these people! Crimson hair....pale skin....deeeep purple eyes.... That is ...

Um, okay...this was quite an interesting story to read! I have to say, I love the storyline - being the happy little God-fearing person I am. :) As usual the ...

Hello sapphire! Alright, lets get moving on this review... So, the very first thing I noticed in this short story were the grammatical errors. For instance, you stated "Anya was ...

Hello Alex! I see you're new to the Society so first off, Welcome! I hope you're doing grand. :) Second of all, I'm supposed to review this, so here we ...

Hello! This is my first review on poetry, so please just bear with me... First off, I found this very interesting but awkwardly written with all your short statements and ...

Hello! First off, this poem seemed very poetic in a way and not too short-storyish and repetition is always a great idea to me. But I am a bit confused ...