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Re: Will Our Love Ever Fade?
Hiii lauren! Okay, so I see the point of this, this girl is questioning the future of her and her boyfriend, and it kind of left me with a bittersweet ...
May 22, 2017 -
Re: beings Stared at
Hi, it's me again. OKAY. First of all. That phrase after verse one about science and gravity and the Big Bang is amazing. No, it's AMAZING . I don't just ...
May 19, 2017 -
Re: Old Habit Part 1
Oooh, this is crazy. I'm really not much of fan of this kind of setting in a lot of stories, but I do like how you have it here. And ...
May 18, 2017 -
Re: Dear Mom
Hiya there, MJ! Allow me to start off by saying this was super sweet, and I loved it. You really did a fantastic job with all the emotion and regret ...
May 17, 2017 -
Re: Aged-paper, ink and dirt.
Ahhh, this is nice. I wasn't sure if I was the only weirdo in the world who loved the smell of books. There's just something about it... There's this distinct ...
May 12, 2017 -
Re: "One of the most certain facts of History..."
First things first, Wrisky, allow me to say I most definitely agree in Jesus. And with this essay. But. Why is it so short? It takes a lot to prove ...
May 12, 2017 -
Re: Still prisoners? Chapter 3 of My messed up life.
Hey-a there, Midnightmoon . I've never read any of your previous chapters so if I get something twisted or dreadfully wrong, I'm sorry! I'll do my best here. I do ...
May 12, 2017 -
Re: Guadalupe The Mosquito
Hey lolo! Aha, this was a slightly humorous story (also very dramatic), and you did succeed in bringing a smile to my face. You certainly had some effective imagery, such ...
May 12, 2017 -
Re: Deepest Desires
Hi, Pomeroy! Oh my word, this was GREAT ! I honestly have hated every single story concerning this kind of magic. They always creeped me out. But you've totally succeeded ...
May 10, 2017 -
Re: Out of Illusion
I can honestly say I've done the same thing the narrator does in here. Who wants to accept the death and horror in this world, anyway? Some days it will ...
May 9, 2017 -
Re: Equivalent Worlds - Chapter Eleven
Hi ScarlettFire! Unfortunately, I haven't read any of your previous chapters and I apologize if I got anything wrong. Just bear with me, please. : D This maybe wasn't the ...
May 9, 2017 -
Re: Frost Lark News 5/7/17
Hey, Shey-Shey! Oh my word. I can't believe I just came up with that. XD Apologies afterwards. But yay, Frost Lark is back! In answer to your survey, I'll be ...
May 8, 2017 -
Re: Darkness Becomes Me
Hello there, pirates! Woah. This was super short! Thanks for giving me something to review real quick. XD I like how you have the protagonist as confused as the reader ...
May 5, 2017 -
Re: Chapter 3:Lanelle
Hi, Rose ! Man, I feel kind of bad... I've never read any of the chapters of this story before when I saw them hanging around, and now I regret ...
May 4, 2017 -
Re: Main Cell (Part 1)
Hi, Holy! Congrats on being my 65th review - hooray! XD Lately the Green Room has been so clean I haven't been able to review anything, but not this time ...
May 3, 2017
