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  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Will Our Love Ever Fade?

    Hiii lauren! Okay, so I see the point of this, this girl is questioning the future of her and her boyfriend, and it kind of left me with a bittersweet ...

    May 22, 2017
  • Art » Culture, Lyrical Re: beings Stared at

    Hi, it's me again. OKAY. First of all. That phrase after verse one about science and gravity and the Big Bang is amazing. No, it's AMAZING . I don't just ...

    May 19, 2017
  • Short Story » General, Other Re: Old Habit Part 1

    Oooh, this is crazy. I'm really not much of fan of this kind of setting in a lot of stories, but I do like how you have it here. And ...

    May 18, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Dear Mom

    Hiya there, MJ! Allow me to start off by saying this was super sweet, and I loved it. You really did a fantastic job with all the emotion and regret ...

    May 17, 2017
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Aged-paper, ink and dirt.

    Ahhh, this is nice. I wasn't sure if I was the only weirdo in the world who loved the smell of books. There's just something about it... There's this distinct ...

    May 12, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Literature, Spiritual Re: "One of the most certain facts of History..."

    First things first, Wrisky, allow me to say I most definitely agree in Jesus. And with this essay. But. Why is it so short? It takes a lot to prove ...

    May 12, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Still prisoners? Chapter 3 of My messed up life.

    Hey-a there, Midnightmoon . I've never read any of your previous chapters so if I get something twisted or dreadfully wrong, I'm sorry! I'll do my best here. I do ...

    May 12, 2017
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: Guadalupe The Mosquito

    Hey lolo! Aha, this was a slightly humorous story (also very dramatic), and you did succeed in bringing a smile to my face. You certainly had some effective imagery, such ...

    May 12, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Deepest Desires

    Hi, Pomeroy! Oh my word, this was GREAT ! I honestly have hated every single story concerning this kind of magic. They always creeped me out. But you've totally succeeded ...

    May 10, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Out of Illusion

    I can honestly say I've done the same thing the narrator does in here. Who wants to accept the death and horror in this world, anyway? Some days it will ...

    May 9, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Equivalent Worlds - Chapter Eleven

    Hi ScarlettFire! Unfortunately, I haven't read any of your previous chapters and I apologize if I got anything wrong. Just bear with me, please. : D This maybe wasn't the ...

    May 9, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Satire, Humor Re: Frost Lark News 5/7/17

    Hey, Shey-Shey! Oh my word. I can't believe I just came up with that. XD Apologies afterwards. But yay, Frost Lark is back! In answer to your survey, I'll be ...

    May 8, 2017
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Darkness Becomes Me

    Hello there, pirates! Woah. This was super short! Thanks for giving me something to review real quick. XD I like how you have the protagonist as confused as the reader ...

    May 5, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Chapter 3:Lanelle

    Hi, Rose ! Man, I feel kind of bad... I've never read any of the chapters of this story before when I saw them hanging around, and now I regret ...

    May 4, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Main Cell (Part 1)

    Hi, Holy! Congrats on being my 65th review - hooray! XD Lately the Green Room has been so clean I haven't been able to review anything, but not this time ...

    May 3, 2017


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