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Honestly, these are questions I am often too afraid to ask myself, I have been dating my current boyfriend for over a year and I'm worried it's getting or will get stale and that's my biggest fear. So good job at being relate-able and relevant. Though the subject matter was touching and I enjoyed how you used the constant bombardment of questions, I felt like the work as a whole was lacking something. Because it is a string of questions you sacrificed the ability to describe in depth what this person is feeling. However, you were more effective in instilling the feeling of fear and doubt which I think was your intention all along. I guess it's good how much this poem makes me hurt inside and worry because it means you did something right.
Points: 431
Reviews: 305
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