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  • Other » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Crying for help

    Hello Bitty! I hope you're doing fantastic today. This is a little overdue, but Welcome to the YWS! To be honest, I keep having to re-read this, because I feel ...

    Aug 10, 2017
  • Article / Essay » General, Realistic Re: titles are as overrated as my talent

    Hello there, Grace. I'm not entirely sure if you're looking for an actual review on this, but I'll say what I can. It was a different piece of literature, for ...

    Aug 9, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter One (The Mate Between Brothers) Improved Version

    Hello there, Bailey! Considering the reviewer before me left quite a lengthy and detailed review, I don't think I'll be taking much of your time today. :P This. Was interesting. ...

    Aug 4, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Blind Cupid: Part One

    Hey GG! I haven't reviewed in a while, but I've been hanging around the Green Room and thought I'd give this a shot. Okay? Okay. First off, I like how ...

    Aug 2, 2017
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Realistic Re: Twist (Part 3 of 3)

    Look who's baaackkk! *wink wink* So, first of all. WHAT?! NO! Why did the story end like that?! I was just getting to know the guy! *wails* *whines* *cries* But ...

    Jul 7, 2017
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Realistic Re: Twist (Part 2 of 3)

    Hi, MJ! Okay. So I briefly glanced at your Part 1 of this story a little bit ago, but never actually read it, so I am quite proud of myself ...

    Jul 6, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Fantasy Re: Corruption

    Hello there therichalder , and Happy Review Day! Okay. So I'm confused. About this whole story. You wrote it absolutely beautifully, I didn't see any grammatical errors, the emotion was ...

    Jun 25, 2017
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Supernatural Re: Realm of the dragons 4/4

    Hello Holiday, and Happy Review Day! I haven't read any previous parts of this, so I apologize if I misinterpret anything wrongly. This was difficult for me to read, due ...

    Jun 25, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Satire Re: Frost Lark News 6/4/17

    Aaaaaand I'm BACK! For another " Super Unhelpful Review ." Hehe. But really, though. Here's just my overall thoughts: I love the title of your main article here. Not "Mayor ...

    Jun 25, 2017
  • Other » Romantic, General Re: siesta

    Good afternoon, if you don't mind, I'll just be giving your piece a quick review. Cute. And sweet. Those are literally the words that passed through my mind when I ...

    Jun 25, 2017
  • Other » Realistic, Narrative Re: Open Letter to Mom pt 3

    Hi, legacy. I think I read one of your previous letters and reviewed it, so I'll just go along and do the same thing here. Though I'm not too sure ...

    Jun 23, 2017
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Humor Re: We Will Walk You

    Hi Zelda! Aw, that's sad your dog was taken from you, but I do like how you made this... song? very lighthearted and fun. It was short and sweet, and ...

    Jun 20, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Review, Literature Re: Book Review: The Unwanteds, by Lisa McMann

    Hey BeThe! I've honestly never read this book before, but it's cool that you decided to review it. I'm not sure if you knew about this, but there is a ...

    Jun 3, 2017
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Sleep

    Hello there, Hailey; I'll just be stopping by real quick to give this work another review. Random Review Thoughts Okay, first off, this is sad. This is really sad. Your ...

    May 25, 2017
  • Short Story » Narrative, Health Re: i spy with my little eye...

    Hi, Sophie! I like the idea you have for this because honestly, people are sooo caught up in technology and themselves, I do agree with this girl. Some things in ...

    May 24, 2017


I was flummoxed by fractious Franny's decision to abrogate analgesics for the moribund victims of the recent conflagration. Of course, to display histrionics was discretionary, but I did so anyways, implicating a friend in my drama to make the effect cumulative. I think a misanthrope would have a prosaic appellation, perhaps one related to autonomy and the rejection of anthropocentrism. I think they wouldn't think much of the prominence of watching the coagulation of tea to prognosticate future malevolent events, not even if those events were related to jurisprudence.
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