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Re: Crying for help
Hello Bitty! I hope you're doing fantastic today. This is a little overdue, but Welcome to the YWS! To be honest, I keep having to re-read this, because I feel ...
Aug 10, 2017 -
Re: titles are as overrated as my talent
Hello there, Grace. I'm not entirely sure if you're looking for an actual review on this, but I'll say what I can. It was a different piece of literature, for ...
Aug 9, 2017 -
Re: Chapter One (The Mate Between Brothers) Improved Version
Hello there, Bailey! Considering the reviewer before me left quite a lengthy and detailed review, I don't think I'll be taking much of your time today. :P This. Was interesting. ...
Aug 4, 2017 -
Re: Blind Cupid: Part One
Hey GG! I haven't reviewed in a while, but I've been hanging around the Green Room and thought I'd give this a shot. Okay? Okay. First off, I like how ...
Aug 2, 2017 -
Re: Twist (Part 3 of 3)
Look who's baaackkk! *wink wink* So, first of all. WHAT?! NO! Why did the story end like that?! I was just getting to know the guy! *wails* *whines* *cries* But ...
Jul 7, 2017 -
Re: Twist (Part 2 of 3)
Hi, MJ! Okay. So I briefly glanced at your Part 1 of this story a little bit ago, but never actually read it, so I am quite proud of myself ...
Jul 6, 2017 -
Re: Corruption
Hello there therichalder , and Happy Review Day! Okay. So I'm confused. About this whole story. You wrote it absolutely beautifully, I didn't see any grammatical errors, the emotion was ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: Realm of the dragons 4/4
Hello Holiday, and Happy Review Day! I haven't read any previous parts of this, so I apologize if I misinterpret anything wrongly. This was difficult for me to read, due ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: Frost Lark News 6/4/17
Aaaaaand I'm BACK! For another " Super Unhelpful Review ." Hehe. But really, though. Here's just my overall thoughts: I love the title of your main article here. Not "Mayor ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: siesta
Good afternoon, if you don't mind, I'll just be giving your piece a quick review. Cute. And sweet. Those are literally the words that passed through my mind when I ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: Open Letter to Mom pt 3
Hi, legacy. I think I read one of your previous letters and reviewed it, so I'll just go along and do the same thing here. Though I'm not too sure ...
Jun 23, 2017 -
Re: We Will Walk You
Hi Zelda! Aw, that's sad your dog was taken from you, but I do like how you made this... song? very lighthearted and fun. It was short and sweet, and ...
Jun 20, 2017 -
Re: Book Review: The Unwanteds, by Lisa McMann
Hey BeThe! I've honestly never read this book before, but it's cool that you decided to review it. I'm not sure if you knew about this, but there is a ...
Jun 3, 2017 -
Re: Sleep
Hello there, Hailey; I'll just be stopping by real quick to give this work another review. Random Review Thoughts Okay, first off, this is sad. This is really sad. Your ...
May 25, 2017 -
Re: i spy with my little eye...
Hi, Sophie! I like the idea you have for this because honestly, people are sooo caught up in technology and themselves, I do agree with this girl. Some things in ...
May 24, 2017
