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Re: Stakes and Dates {Chapter 3}
[My mom raised me to be a strong and independent woman and because of that I never felt the need to rely on guys to make me happy. And to ...
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Re: The Higher (The Acolytes pt. 2)
[If anyone had told Niklas that grey was simply the fusion of black and white, he would have disagreed. Black was dark, cold, stagnant – the color of coal. White ...
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Re: Risk ch 5
besides use this line, i wanna suggest u to include this: "Payge immediately noticed the change in me that week. " [suggestion: "That week, payge immediately noticed the in me.] ...
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Re: The Empire Chapter 3: Nothing Stays a Secret Pt. 2
as i told ya in ur previous work that u write well! ur work is nice. here i don't wanna repeat those words. here i wanna tell ya that ur ...
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Re: The Empire Chapter 4: Blood is Thicker than Water
a grt work with a grt start folk! i like ur imaginativity, how u use characters, u are a perfect ringmaster, u know how to get work from the iotic ...
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Re: The Dimension Walls Prologue Chapter One Chapter Two
really i agree with krystal, u hv immense talent of writing such stuffs! i like it very much!u are good with ur writing, trendiness, cleanliness......n lot more. ur stuff is ...
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Re: Pregnant Satan
wow! wat a wonderful creative work! i like this. as u hv connected a mother's story in it, which is awesome! this work is spiritualistic plus trendy! i didn'y prefer ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: HOPE
i didnt really enjoy ur stuff! coz it is in the form of cluster right now! every line is overlapping on each other! the idea behind this poem is good! ...
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Re: A Witch In The Modern World
ah! it is a magical poem. the concept is really nice. ur poem is long, in rhythm, stanzas are perfectly framed. i like the way u explained each and evrything. ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: This Lonely World of White
it is a nice short poem, lot of creativity in it. the wild journey u r displaying over here is nice. the poem is nicely written, u hv introduced grt ...
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Re: Damp Fog
it is a nice stuff. i like this. starting point of ur poem is nice. i appreciate ur poem's trendiness.. u included lot of goody stuff into ur poem. in ...
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Re: Lost Innocence
shiksha it is a nice stuff! grt! it is better than ur previous stuff! sorry for making the comparison. but really it is a nice stuff. ur stanzas are very ...
Jun 29, 2013 -
Re: Beskonechnaya
what a grt stuff! it is nice! very romantic! the title is nice. i like Russian names! and " Beskonechnaya" is itself a grt name! wow! this work seems very ...
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Re: Siberian Nights
grt stuff audy! "siberian nights" the title of the poem is nice. i really enjoyed ur work. u hv started ur work with grt start. from top to bottom i ...
Jun 29, 2013 -
Re: Goodbye grandad
RIGHT NOW I AM LISTENING TO THIS BEAUTIFUL SONG, "GET UP RATTLE"! IT IS a wonderful song! but not as good as ur work! this is magnifica, mate! u hv ...
Jun 29, 2013
