ringettegirl

WOW! i really liked that! umm i'd say you did very very well! i'm not one to crit....but i loved the poem anyway! i hope you keep writing! :) Ringettegirl

I loved it!!!!! I love how I can really relate to that poem!!! Once again I loved it!!!!

your**** sorry!! i do that alot! :l

i liked you poem!! it totally described my life right about now! keep writing!! ~ringettegirl~ :p

i didn't ind it. but you need to put something more into it! like try and make it sound more like a poem, it doesn't flow. KEEP TRYING though!

wow!! thats good!! love it!! ttyl Ringettegirl!! (Jess)

different but cool

Your Story was sooo good!! Wow thats the only word i can think of right now!! Very very gooD!!

Wow!!! that was really good!!! i really describes my life!!! keep writing, when your bord! lol!

that was good! but i still don't understand how the fairys get trapped in "The Cursed" dreams? thats all btu i'm looking forward to chapter 1!!!

wow! that was really good! but i do have a couple of questions, why is this guy a murder, i mean what did he do? well i guess it was ...

Well it does really make me to read on but just afew questions first. there isn't really a clear picture being painted in my head i need a bit more ...

That was really good! And I can't believe a 10 year old wrote it, it was that good! It really describes me in a way! That was really good again! ...