I got bored doing nothing so I wrote this.. Tell me what you guys think.
Who Am I
Am I just a leaf,
Drifting along with the wind,
Never finding what it is like to belong?
A rock in a desert,
Reliable and steady
Yet never noticed until needed?
Or am I a mountain overlooking everything,
Full of wisdom,
But never truly appreciated?
If this is who I am,
Can I truly say that I am somebody?
Or am I just a nobody?
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That is a really short, simple and a nice poem.
I like the way you've used imagery and the dynamic nature of your verses.
Keep Writing!
this was great, I loved the way you described everything!
very nicely done.
Wow!!! that was really good!!! i really describes my life!!! keep writing, when your bord! lol!
i liked it!
nice in depth meaning!
great work
vince
Loved it !
I really like your imagery and descriptions. I look forward to reading more poetry by you.
It is very good.
I liked it.It was very deep.
I don't understand the last line.
This was my favourite!
The rest was good. I really enjoyd this!
Hey Azure!!This is the first time I am reading your work....and I liked it.The starting was good,and the descriptions in short was good.A nice small poem.
Keep writing and posting,as M.B.Author said "You are getting the hang of writing poems".
I liked this. I liked how you described the leaf, rock, and the mountain.
Good Job! You are getting the hang of writing poems.
-- M.B.Author
P.S.
You are not a nobody Azure! :D