Published October 31, 2007
"children"
All loving children
create many hopes and dreams
please don't destroy them.
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nice haiku...I have to write one for my class...but they are hard to write.
-bobiscool
Its makes me think! Nice!
Its short but simple and I can tell you put allot of thinking into it!
Good work!
~ Gwen
different but cool
nice and simple. I like it!