Lost at Sea
dedicated to my BFF's, and close people that i've shared the best with!
when I first met you
I knew we were a pair
we could get along
life would make us fair
Looked at you
And studied hard
You had a lively face
and a true natured heart
that's all I need
Nothing more I have to see
That is plenty
For meeee
Chorus:
I don't judge
I let differences be
But once i stared into your eyes
I felt lost at sea
and suddenly
I knew it was true
I could get along with life's ways
as long as i'm by you
and you're touch
can leave be breathless
I knew you'd be here for me
my new feelings leave me lost at sea
END OF CHORUS
It be hard
But you told me i'd be fine
as long as I use all my strength
and give it my best try
i don't need to be Miss Perfect
To be you're queen
I don't need to be
on a cover of a magazine
Chorus
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That was really good! And I can't believe a 10 year old wrote it, it was that good! It really describes me in a way! That was really good again! Keep on writing!
i like it but the sea is a methaphor right?