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Thank you for the advice. I tried to break it into stanzas but when I published it, the stanzas broke. I think the rhyming scheme would%u2019ve been better if the ...

Wow! Amazing poem! I really liked it!

I loved this poem! It’s so............. wonderful! I loved the last stanza! It was my favourite!! The imagery and the words you used were just so amazing!!! I also loved ...

I loved this poem! It’s so............. wonderful! I loved the last stanza! It was my favourite!! The imagery and the words you used were just so amazing!!! I also loved ...

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Amazing poem!

Amazing poem!

Hi! Another chapter of Eureka Phillips, and this one was amazing! I’m sorry, but I am REALLY bad at reviews. So, I avoid them as much as I can. But, ...

Hi! Another chapter of Eureka Phillips, and this one was amazing! I’m sorry, but I am REALLY bad at reviews. So, I avoid them as much as I can. But, ...

Thanks!

Hi! This was a wonderful poem, and the twist was just.......... unexpected. I only found one mistake, and that’s: I know where the Chocolates gone. To I know where the ...

Thank you! I%u2019m really glad you enjoyed my poem! I wrote the poem in stanzas but when I published it, it appeared like this. And I will try to improve ...

I wrote it in stanzas but when I published it, it appeared like this.....

Thank you! This is my first time I am writing a story-poem, so I didn%u2019t know about all that.....

Thanks! I don%u2019t really think I CAN write a series about this, I don%u2019t know why, it whenever I try something like this...... I just can%u2019t ........:(

Wow oh wow!!! This is truly an amazing piece of writing! I loved this!