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Hey, rhia here to review! This was cute, short, and easy to read. It was a nice and fun, light poem. It made me smile. I thought that saying "hairs" ...

Hello, rhia here to review! Well, this was good. I liked it. I was taken aback, at first, by how short it was, but it made it easy to read, ...

Hello, rhia here to review! I'll start with nitpicks: I've always had a habit of regretting; a habit which I’m sure you have too. The semicolon here isn't the best ...

Hello, rhia here to review! I'll do grammar and sentence correction nitpicks first But arms endure, persist, stretch out , to see I don't think you need the last comma ...

a little more tired, a little more older than twenty three. Should just be "a little older". More is redundant and technically incorrect grammar. Gloria sighed watching the faucet snort ...

Um okay, so, wow? Wow. Wow? I'm not really sure, kind of processing still. First time I read it, I thought it was really well done, then on the second ...

Hello, rhia here to review! I'm going to start with grammar and sentence correction, little nitpicky things, and then I'll tell you what I like. It wont even change my ...

Hello, rhia here to review! I'm going to go through grammar and sentence correction nitpicks first and foremost, before I get to what I like. First off, your use of ...

Hello, rhia here to review! This was nice and short, and easy to read, so I liked that. I usually don't care for rhyming poems because they often feel so ...

Hello, rhia here to review! I'm going to go through and nitpick first. Young, crazy, and recklessly we would make our way to the beach, This doesn't quite make sense, ...

Hello, rhia here to review! THis is really great, really. And I don't say that a lot. I tend to cringe away from rhyming/ more structured poems on this site, ...

Hello, rhia here to review. I'm going to start off by saying that I haven't been following this novel, so I'm only going to review from an editing point of ...

Hello, rhia here to review! I'm going to start off by saying, I haven't been following this story, so I'm going to only focus on sentence correction, grammar, and any ...

Hey there, rhia here to review! As you mentioned that this is personal, I will avoid reviewing based on content and focus only on grammar. However, even if you hadn't ...

Hello, rhia here to review on this lovely review day! Well, this is nice and short. Let's see if I can find enough to review on. We'll start with nitpicks. ...