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rhiasofia

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Monsters.

    "Do not discard your monster He is not unlike you;" Let me just say, what a start. Such a powerful thump to start out with, bravo. One thing I don't ...

    Feb 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Nicola

    Aw, this is really sweet! The entire time, it just had a really feel-good mood. I didn't notice much to fix, but I'll point out a few little nitpicks "That ...

    Feb 8, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Nothing.

    Hey, Strange, Rhia here to review. Just a few typos I noticed Today I saw something I *have* never seen before I also learn*ed* that karma is real There were ...

    Feb 8, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: black white black white grey

    Unless we play wizards chess :) Sorry, I have to make a nerdy reference with everything. Despite my terrible joke, I really like this. It's really beautiful to think about, ...

    Feb 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: Ex.Tempo.Rise.

    Okey Dokey, Rhia here to review! This is really beautiful. There is so much wonderful imagery here, and its quite unique. One thing I really want to commend you on ...

    Feb 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Understand Me

    Well, this poem is nice and short, easy to understand. One thing, I'm pretty sure that you repeated twice on the first line is a typo? if not, sorry. If ...

    Feb 7, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Twenty

    Just to be supportive, you do know that BMI is one of the least accurate of the health measurements, right? I'm in an anatomy class, and we just went through ...

    Feb 7, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Horror Re: From Somewhere, There Came a Knocking

    Oooh, spooky! I liked the way you worded the "something came knocking" reminded me of that line in The Raven by Poe. I could definitey compare this to a more ...

    Feb 7, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: King and Lionheart

    Kay, I love this song, and I love the fact that you used a Doctor Who name, very unique to most, and personal for us Whovians. This is really interesting, ...

    Feb 7, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Silence

    Hello, Rhia here to return the favor and review you! This was a really sweet, tender short story. You really filled out the main character very well for the brevity ...

    Feb 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Historical Fiction Re: The Blaze of Battle

    Hey there, Rhia here to return the favor and review your poem! This is really good! You do a great job with the imagery and emotion of battle and war. ...

    Feb 3, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Down the rabbit hole, part 2

    Hey there, Rhia here to review! I love writing that draws from popular tales, and I love Alice in Wonderland, so I really like this. It's nice and short, and ...

    Feb 3, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Stress Test

    I love the opening with your family background. I'm of Celtic descent myself, and I grew up with a lot of the stories and artwork prevalent in my life, so ...

    Feb 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Culture Re: Followed by a Red Truck, or Successful Exorcism

    Ooh, I do like this. Definitely super well written. It really captures the unfortunate yet all too frequent fear that women are subjected to when alone, or in areas with ...

    Feb 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: Letters

    Why would you write something like that!?! Tears. So many tears. Beautiful. I love the Fred and George letters fanfictions. They get me every single stinking time. "like I've been ...

    Feb 2, 2014


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
— LCDR Geordi La Forge