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I feel like this is a little to similar to "can you paint with all the colors of the wind" from the Pocahontas film. I couldn't quite enjoy it because ...

This one is really interesting and thought-provoking. I feel like this one flowed really well, and again, props for rhyming :) Lonely even with others around, and quite because there's ...

Hello, and welcome to YWS! What a personal first poem to share, and great job with it. I like the idea of bits of oneself being left behind on those ...

Hey, Rhia here to review. I think that the topic and explanation is good, so I'm just going to give some nitpicky editing "Sometimes people even seem to actually fall ...

I like this poem, but I'm going to start out with some nitpicks. But yet they aren't beating. But and yet have basically the same meaning, so putting them both ...

Hey, rhia here to review! Kay, first and foremost, I'm going to nitpick One we have used so many times to sharpen an pencil for unlimited creation. Should be sharpen ...

This is really beautiful! I love this so much. Such stunning imagery, and you really made this topic your own with all these analogies. It's very original and awesome. The ...

This is a very pretty, haunting poem. Your words made such a curious little story, and I could really feel a sad longing as I read it. I love the ...

Alright, here's the edit. The morning breeze Delivers this message; “I have always believed in you” *** I am standing In the field I had once seen in a dream ...

One way to get around that glitch is to hit shift+enter between the normal lines and they won't be double spaced, then you can use the double space as a ...

Hey there, Rhia here to review! Wow, I really like the almost disjointed relation between the lines. They surprise you, cause they don't seem quite right separated, but altogether, they ...

Hello, Rhia here to review! First off, I want to mention how rare it is for contemporary poets to write center-formatted poems lately, mostly because of the void of white ...

Hello, rhia here to review. WElcome to YWS, first off! And what a powerful first poem to share. Very good job with all of this. It was a joy to ...

I agree with BloodinkSeesFootage on a few points, like not quite liking the way which you displayed this feeling, and the controversial one-sidedness of the poem. Also, with the fact ...

Hello, rhia here for a review, try to clear out this green room so I can post without using 500 points! Well, this is a very relatable poem. Content wise, ...