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Hey, Guess what! It's Poe in a poem. I love it. ~Retro Disco666

No problem. It's a good piece. ~Retro Disco666

I like it before, but i can see that this is an improvement. ~Retro Disco666

Hey, As poems in this genre go, this is okay. I liked it, but i can't see how it relates to the title, and where it does, it doesn't enough. ...

I actually disagree. I love this poem. I think the repetition re-enforces everything that she has to carry, but it seems that is just me, but i wouldn't change this ...

A book called the left hand of god. I bought it was then like, what the hell is this on about.

Hey again. The edit has made all the difference. It now flows like a good poem. Which it is. This piece has shot up in my opinion. I now love ...

Hey, It's good. . . but not good as a poem. I would try and expand on that last line and either make a short story or another poem, because ...

I love it. Simple as. It is pure excellent. It reminds me of Edgar Allan Poe in a poem. Well done. I can't find a fault or flaw anywhere. ~Retro ...

It's sick and sweet. It is perfect. Truly well done. Very engrossing and portrays love really well. Keep it up ~Retro disco666

Thanks for the comments.

That's how i meant for it to come acroos. For a book i would be fine, but for a website it seems long.

I think the grammar errors make this piece seem more real. I don't think you should correct them. Well done, good piece. ~Retro Disco666

Thank you :D I see what you have said with the RED CAPITALS!!!! and i appreciate them :D and dark is what i do :D

I try and review the newer pieces. I think they are better, especially the poetry ones.