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Hello! Retro here for a review! First off i'll do some nitpicks then talk about what I liked, okay? My first is just a bit of a suggestion. you've got ...

Hey, Retro here for a review. First off i'll do a few nitpicks then talk about what I liked, okay? :) Right, the first thing I want to talk about ...

Hey Rhia! Retro here for a review! First off i'm doing a few nitpicks and suggestions and then i'll talk about what I liked, okay? :) "Behind a comatose boy, ...

Hey retro here! I just wanted to say I loved this, expect for one part; When you use the * I think it ruins the poem slightly and takes sways ...

Hello! Retro here to do a review. First i'll talk about what I think needs editing or changing then i'll talk about what I liked, okay? Well, the first thing ...

Hey Retro here. Well there isn't much to review being as it is a group piece so obviously it is pretty well rounded! I just really wanted to say that ...

Hey! Retro here for a review! I'm sorry that you had a bad day, but I won't be tearing this up! I'll just do some nitpicks, then talk about what ...

Hello Luna! Retro here for a review :) Your poem is gramatically correct and everything so I won't be quoting on anything actually within your poem, instead I want to ...

Hello Dreamy, and on behalf on district four, hello! :D I'll do some nitpicks first then talk about what I liked, okay? :) 'Just when the crowds head turned to ...

Hello and welcome to YWS! I'm Retro and shall review your poem :D First i'll do some nitpick suggestions, then talk about what I liked, okay? The first thing is ...

Hey! Retro here for a review :D First i'll do some nitpicks then talk about what I liked, okay? :) The first thing I want to suggest is to break ...

Hello my dear magpie, Retro here for a review :) There are no nitpicks for your piece, but obviously my compliments aren't the only thing a review needs so I'm ...

As I have just said to you in chat dear Shame, WOW! But first I shall talk through I few things i'm unsure of and then talk about this monument ...

Hey! Retro here to review! First I shall do some nitpicks then talk about what I liked, okay? :) 'She likes to rape love of the young' I don't like ...

Hello! Retro here for a review, and happy review day! First off i'll do some nitpicks, then talk about what I liked, okay? :) The first thing I want to ...