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Hey, The content within this piece is good, so well done, and I really like what you are going for here. It doesn't quite feel like poetry though, I think ...

Hey, That is very sweet and very short. I was intrigued about how you would tackle something like this and yet again, you didn't disappoint. We’re falling over our heartstrings ...

Hey, I think most things in the poem were historically accurate which is a bonus. This is a beautiful poem full of rich imagery that really jumps out and captures ...

I didn't find it funny so you are correct in thinking that XD, however I did enjoy the piece. It was not one of those pieces that you have to ...

Hello, YAY! a horror story, my favourite and you delivered it well. I thought your ending was terrific I have to say so well done for that alone :D As ...

Hey, I found this to be very original and quite humorous in a sense. This is the first "poem" I have read about zombies and I find the idea of ...

Hey, I really loved the imagery and emotion in the piece, it was very thought about and very well done. I am very glad this piece was done in haiku ...

Hello, I like all this poem apart from one bit. The shadows of an old home with fluorescent lights and stumbling customers piercing sound of cash registers’ clangings and sloshing ...

Hey, This was very interesting. It looks like it could go some place good, yet you don't know where. Have you thought about bringing in Sally Crow and what so ...

Hey, Okay, at the best of times I don't like rhyme that much, but here it works yet still annoys me. If you are going to rhyme I think it ...

A good poem. I think what you were trying to write about is a difficult topic and you conveyed it well. Like jagged said the rhyme did feel forced but ...

Hey, I loved this in more ways than you can imagine. I thought it was very original and when she died I was taken back. It was very short but ...

Hey, I liked it. It was very action packed, which was good. I liked how the MC didn't know a thing about it until it was to late. I thought ...

Hello, You have done a good job editing this, I didn't notice anything major. that he couldn't at least attempt to fight his fate this morning. That doesn't sound right ...

Hello, Is this part two or three to something? This was strange. You threw the reader in at the deep end and it worked quite well. It was very emotion ...