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Re: Scream little girl
Thanks, I was definately in deep thought when I wrote this, just having a bad day. She's like thirteen or fourteen, it's between her and a teacher. She doesn't realize ...
Nov 18, 2011 -
Re: Cody
I am a chick, he is of the male gender.
Jul 16, 2011 -
Re: Untitled
Thank you. (:
Jun 30, 2011 -
Re: Untitled
What do you think me use do poop?
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: Eclipses
Absolutely beautiful. SO much imagery and feeling behind this gorgeous peice. YOu are such a good writer, I wish I was half as good as you, the way the story ...
May 20, 2011 -
Re: Is it because?
I did like this piece. The only part that I wasn't quite sure about was when you said "because he didn't show?" That part didn't flow with your piece so ...
Mar 3, 2011 -
Re: You left her
Thank you (:. I just wrote this sitting in class, and thank you people have told me that before (:. Your nice
Dec 15, 2010 -
Re: Joseph J. DiMicco October 28, 1923 - September 29, 2010
This poem was fantastic, I really liked it, you did such a good job. I loved the way everything seemed to flow together and rhyme. You did good and I'm ...
Dec 8, 2010 -
Re: Love lies . (Please review) (:
Dear hockey dude. I like the please review so nananana boo boo. Kiss it! It was pretty good I thought, and it came from the heart thanks for your advice ...
Dec 6, 2010 -
Re: I Hate Him *1*
I liked the second but I loved the first. Like I said, I think you should explain why she hates him. I'm really curious why.
Dec 3, 2010 -
Re: I love you
Woah wait! Sorry it's me again but... whahhh??? O.o! Your 12?!! If you are really twelve your a spectacular writer. You my friend MUST keep writing. It's obvious you have ...
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: Love Lies
Thank you Angel heart(: it was about my first love(:
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: Definitely maybe
I like the ending and this poem is really sweet! Your friend should join YWS(:! Lol, but I think she has a very nice flow and is a good writer. ...
Nov 19, 2010 -
Re: Echoes
This poem makes my heart soften and my smile spread. (: It is very sweet good job(:!
Nov 19, 2010 -
Re: Sparkling Juipiter.
Haha I wrote it because I was bored. It has no point, or subject thats the point(: Thanks brooskey
Nov 19, 2010
