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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Scream little girl

    Thanks, I was definately in deep thought when I wrote this, just having a bad day. She's like thirteen or fourteen, it's between her and a teacher. She doesn't realize ...

    Nov 18, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Cody

    I am a chick, he is of the male gender.

    Jul 16, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Untitled

    Thank you. (:

    Jun 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Untitled

    What do you think me use do poop?

    Jun 29, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Eclipses

    Absolutely beautiful. SO much imagery and feeling behind this gorgeous peice. YOu are such a good writer, I wish I was half as good as you, the way the story ...

    May 20, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Is it because?

    I did like this piece. The only part that I wasn't quite sure about was when you said "because he didn't show?" That part didn't flow with your piece so ...

    Mar 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: You left her

    Thank you (:. I just wrote this sitting in class, and thank you people have told me that before (:. Your nice

    Dec 15, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Joseph J. DiMicco October 28, 1923 - September 29, 2010

    This poem was fantastic, I really liked it, you did such a good job. I loved the way everything seemed to flow together and rhyme. You did good and I'm ...

    Dec 8, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Love lies . (Please review) (:

    Dear hockey dude. I like the please review so nananana boo boo. Kiss it! It was pretty good I thought, and it came from the heart thanks for your advice ...

    Dec 6, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: I Hate Him *1*

    I liked the second but I loved the first. Like I said, I think you should explain why she hates him. I'm really curious why.

    Dec 3, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: I love you

    Woah wait! Sorry it's me again but... whahhh??? O.o! Your 12?!! If you are really twelve your a spectacular writer. You my friend MUST keep writing. It's obvious you have ...

    Nov 23, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Love Lies

    Thank you Angel heart(: it was about my first love(:

    Nov 23, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Definitely maybe

    I like the ending and this poem is really sweet! Your friend should join YWS(:! Lol, but I think she has a very nice flow and is a good writer. ...

    Nov 19, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Echoes

    This poem makes my heart soften and my smile spread. (: It is very sweet good job(:!

    Nov 19, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Sparkling Juipiter.

    Haha I wrote it because I was bored. It has no point, or subject thats the point(: Thanks brooskey

    Nov 19, 2010


If it looks like a duck, and it quacks like a duck…you should not be so quick to jump to conclusions.
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