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While I applaud your newfound.... dedication to ad homenim attacks, I fail to see how any of this is relevant to the issue to at hand. The topic was what ...

Hi! Grammar note on the grammar note - 'firstly' is okay to use in this context. So is 'first'. Here's a quick source, just in case :)

Best of luck to you!

Four reviews before I even get to read it! Dang, Arouet, you have a following. Clever.

Addendum: English 'sinister' is derived from said French word. Left-handed people were thought to be 'evil' because left-handed people were at an advantage when attacked French castles, due to the ...

Ah, that's interesting. I can see it, now that you mention it, but the whole 'bleeding' segment in the middle still seems to point to femininity? Don't you know what ...

Hello! This is an interesting character profile, but it supposed to be published like a short story? Just wondering!

Oh, I'm glad to have helped!

Go Leo! :')

Like what, might I ask?

'cause, you know, monochrome is such a cool word to build a poem off of, adding more colors would be better contrast, imo. If you're planning on a second draft! ...

While the fact that the flood of numbers is reduced later is heartening, it does not lessen the flood that is happening early. Indeed, you could get away with more ...

Leave Dex/Agility and Int/Magic the same if you will; 'twas but a suggestion. My opinion remains unchanged. I also just noticed the Gender: Male segment of the character sheets - ...

Chapter meaning day or set of days?

Ah, in that case, perhaps perspective swaps like that would be more effective as separate side stories in entirety?