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Hello! Overall, I found this an easy, fun read. Your writing style with its action and plot focus was engaging and the simplicity of the language made it easy to ...

There's a lot to get into here. Subject matter aside, the tone of this piece screams 'looking for a fight'. Okay, you can have one. Thankfully, I'm not a cultural ...

Hello. To begin with, I am glad to see a script instead of a short or a poem. It's unusual and a welcome change of pace. Creative, even, which is ...

Hello! Dropping by to write a quick comment or two just because of how much I enjoyed the simplicity of this poem. The structure reminds me of a haiku - ...

Hey! So I've followed politics for many years now, apropos the Daily Show and relatives, and have a basic grounding in what this politician's general stances are (and widely agree ...

Hello! Based on the setting and the barest minimum of knowledge on the topic, I'm guessing this is a Star Wars: The Clone Wars fanfic. I don't know enough about ...

Hello, Sokka. The first chapter emerges! It makes for a dramatic departure from that prologue on content. I am iffy on that opening paragraph. The way it's written sounds like ...

Firstly, I need to apologize with regards to how this review will turn out - I scrolled down to read the response to @Pan 's review and discovered a description ...

Hello! I clicked on this because, hey, supervillains, who doesn't love those? Firstly, what did I like? I like the concept here, of expounding a supervillain's backstory. I like the ...

Hey. I understand, coming into this, that the goal was to be a cynical, insulting jerk for humor. (After all, I'd expect nothing more from an Aquarius!) And I also ...

Hello! You asked me to take a look at this, so I suppose I shall. The premise here, I think, has good potential. It's been done before success because the ...

Hello! I enjoyed reading this piece, as it both amused me and I learned something new! And isn't learning new things what we should all strive for? The style is ...

Hey! Personally, I enjoyed this piece. The theme and concept is wonderful. The structure to the work lends a poetic rhythm to the snapshot, and combined with the poetic language ...

Wow. This piece took me two or three readthroughs to understand well enough, and I am glad to have done that. The first thing that pops out for me is ...

On content: It's hard to critique a philosophy. So I won't. Perhaps, instead, I will just ask if the way humans pull together makes what happened before feel okay. I ...