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Wow, just wow. This is beautiful! I understand why you put the disclaimer that lack of punctuation/capitalization was intentional, but to me it came across wonderfully! That being an issue ...

Wow!!! What a plot twist!! I love thissss. Your atmosphere is awesome, it felt so chilly and cozy! The way you describe things makes a really rich-feeling world! I definitely ...

This is lovely! I'm so happy you felt confident enough to share. :) The only grammar problem I can see is that "one's" should just be "ones," without the apostrophe. ...

Whoa, I like this a lot! I was hooked from even just the description. You've got a good handle on summaries, and that's something I still have trouble with! My ...

I'm sorry man, stuff like this is never fun. I'm glad you felt like you could write down your feelings like this, though! I don't have too much to critique ...

I like this a lot! The imagery in this is so vivid and profound. I especially like the ending being a twisted version of the beginning, I'm such a sucker ...

I really like this! The soft romanticizing of everyday things reminds me of a Ghibli movie! I'm so impressed by you poets, the ability to make normal objects and actions ...

This is absolutely gorgeous! I'm not a poet so I don't know how accurate I can be, but I can try. The only thing I was wondering is if you ...

I love this! I don't think I have time tonight, but I can't wait to read more of this. Honestly I just have one piece of constructive criticism: "memorising" is ...

This is so lovely! I have what I call "bland fantasy" and "rich fantasy." The first is fantasy where I like it, but it just feels a little too squeaky ...

There is no such thing as normal. There's just people who lie, and people who are unapologetically open and honest. And that's exactly what you're doing. As a gay trans ...

This is stunning! The imagery is absolutely gorgeous. I have a few grammar things, but that's it! First of all, a common mistake: you used the wrong form of your/you're. ...

This seems like it has lots of potential! I'm really interested. I only have a few notes. "Stiffles" has an extra f: it should be "stifles." Also you're missing a ...