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Hello, Mia, racket here to review your poem! Okay, so I really like this. You really captured the feeling of anger, annoyance, just down-right pessimism that is often described as ...

Hi! racket here to review your poem! Don't doubt yourself again on describing things, 'cause you did really well in this poem. I could almost feel the atmosphere you created ...

Hello, racket here to review your work! Okay, well, I really like this. It's very well done and interesting, though there are a few little bits to fix, but not ...

Hello! racket here to review your poem! This is quite interesting, wording wise, in some places. I really like it; it's very elegant and smooth. I only have a few ...

Hello Stegosaurus! racket here to review your poem! This is a really interesting way to describe time. I agree with Falconer and Cheetah below me in that it is accurate... ...

Hello Cairo. Once again, racket here to review your poetry. I am sensing a theme in these... Okay, so again, your imagery and details are very well done and the ...

Hello, Mialy, racket here to review your poem! Okay, so here we have a motivational poem, yes? I like it, though yeah, it is a little cliche. XD I have ...

Hello there! racket here to review your poem! Okay, well, I really like this, for multiple reasons. You've got Harry Potter and Percy Jackson references in there, which is by ...

Hello, Ms. Cello, racket here to review this! XD Okay, yes, I can totally relate! Aaaand, having read your stories, I know at least kind of what you are specifically ...

Hello, Cairo, racket here to review your poem! Okay, this is very, very good. Your detailed setting is admirable and the whole poem is so well done in the description ...

Hello! racket here to review your poem! Well, I would like to say that, first of all, this is a really, really good poem. I can totally relate to everything ...

Hello! racket here to review your poem! Okay, well, I really enjoyed this! It's very well done and the imagery is inspiring. Good job! I have about three things to ...

Well. That must have been at least a slightly unnerving experience for you. O.o Now I'm wondering what made your brain make that up... XD I like it! I appreciate ...

I really like this! Well done! And, also, welcome to YWS! I don't see any spelling errors and your rhyme scheme is nearly perfect, so good job! There are two ...

I love this! I think this is one of those poems you can read backwards and forwards, yes? That takes a lot of skill, so good job! I have tried ...