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that was simply amazing: D very catchy! and it made sence, thse things usually dont so i was really pleasantly surprised =) You far surpass Yahoo; Comcast can't compete! so ...

I loved the 1st and 2nd paragrapgh and the rhyming in all of them was excellent! Only problem i had was the 2nd paragraph A spinster-to-be can already see what ...

I liked the chorus a lot! You have some working on the lyrics ike in here: Are your hero we need, the hero, We asked for? Are you the hero, ...

Anssi...I really hate songs like this they bore me to the death:D the lyrics were good but i hate the "ooh"s and "oh baby"s like this: Love will never go ...

(chorus) Oh please Take me back to 90's I'd give anything to go through it all again Though I've forgot a lot I know this (dot, dot, dot): It was ...

Hahahahaa I laughed for atleast a minute when reading this: Edward: I’m so sparkly! WHEEEEE!!! I didn’t know I could be even hotter! Superman: *hands on hips* I believe you ...

That was great work! I really liked the overall impression Watch how the dice will roll Thats my favorite part, the dice rolling just never lets you down! You made ...

The title is idiotic boyfriend and the poem says this: her strong stand shown as idiotic boyfriend. you talk about a girl as a boyfriend? I think you might want ...

You still have some working on the lyrics. It was okay in sense of rhyming but You were repeating yourself abit and using the same words all over again. [quote]This ...

I really liked it! theres one sentence that really caught my eye: surrounded by people, yet all alone It was a really dramatic remark yet I'm really familiar with that ...