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Re: Removed.
Great poem, Gaurav's random sister that I don't know. I loved it! The following nitpick is just me being me, and just seems better to me. You don't need to ...
Aug 8, 2014 -
Re: The alcoholic introvert
When I read this, I though of a game I play called ROBLOX. On there, there is a game called The Mad Murderer. Two of the characters are named Gordon ...
Aug 5, 2014 -
Re: AdIóS AmigO: A DorA ThE ExploReR FanFictioN.
Hello, Blackwood. Pup here for another review. So... First review I have done for your work. Let's get to the nitpicks: “Shut the hell up, you son of a birch!” ...
Aug 3, 2014 -
Re: My Only Best Friend
Hello, Katya! Puppys here for another review :3 *whispers* I'm only doing this 'cause I need points o3o... *lied* Anywho, I have one nitpick for you, friend :P I had ...
Aug 1, 2014 -
Re: Patiently Waiting: Rewrite
Hallo! Pup back for another review. Good news for you, I only have two nitpicks, and one's not even a real nitpick. And everything got real quiet. 1)Most writers don't ...
Jul 24, 2014 -
Re: Star Wars Fan-Fic
My random brother made up something about when Luke finds out Darth Vader is his dad: Luke... I am your mother - I MEAN FATHER XD Great job with this. ...
Jul 24, 2014 -
Re: The Battle. Chapter 1.
Hey dogs! Pup back for another (random) review! Everyone else got all the nitpicks, but I found one thing that bothered me a little bit: ...that my dad died in ...
Jul 22, 2014 -
Re: Best Friends.
Hello, dogsrule5! Sorry I haven't been around, and I will get to your Battle series ASAP. ;) Anyways, let's get started, shall we? I came up to you, And said ...
Jul 18, 2014 -
Re: Nuts for YWS
AWESOME! I might not be as insane about YWS as others are, but I can relate nonetheless. I love the form of this! I mean the last stanza... extra line... ...
Jul 16, 2014 -
Re: Upside down
This is pretty spanking awesome. I thought it was a depressing poem or something that is supposed to make you feel sad, until I saw the bottom. Nice work on ...
Jul 15, 2014 -
Re: Nighttime and Morning
Awesome poems indeed :D This isn't much of a review, since I only have one nitpick: The blue sky is now a mess of oranges, pinks, and deep passionate reds ...
Jul 15, 2014 -
Re: My Parody of I'm Sexy and I know it.
LOL YOUR DAD IS CRAZY XD I thought you were talking about the cuss word in the title buuuuuut Em101cats said you weren't :3 its ok to say sexy I ...
Jun 18, 2014 -
Re: Forbidden Shadows Chapter Twelve
heeeeeeey :3 puppys back for another (late) review! im in desprete need of points right now, since the 2nd movie came out for HTTYD and I need to get the ...
Jun 17, 2014 -
Re: Rainstorms
wow! I can relate to this o,o being in a rural place, its normal for rain, even in the summer. It's so true too! The noises rain makes is very ...
Jun 16, 2014 -
Re: Tittie Traitor
lol boobs :3 welcome to YWS *throws 5 dollars at and a cake* okie I really enjoyed this piece. im strict with poetry and I don't review it if I ...
Jun 15, 2014