I wrote this parody of this song when I was at a restaurant and my dad wouldn't stop eating!
When I walk into the room, this is what I see, daddy's eating pork chops, and staring at me. He's got peach cobbler for dessert and he anent afraid to show it, show it, show... He's eating and he knows it, knows it, knows it!!!!
I hope you enjoyed this random parody of I'm S*** and I know it!
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LOL YOUR DAD IS CRAZY XD I thought you were talking about the cuss word in the title buuuuuut Em101cats said you weren't :3 its ok to say sexy I guess so you don't have to make people think you're going to swear
Only nitpick:
I learned this the hard way. People told me it was 'unprofessional' to do more than one '!' but I really don't believe them
Keep writing!
~puppys3117~
I don't really believe them either. I mean who cares it's just an exclamation point. Besides this isn't a site where your things gets atomattically gets transferred to the book store or anything!!! So...
lol true! plus its still for learners
LIKE YOU AND MEH 
Ya, I guess so!!! See 3 exclamtions!!! Haha!!!
teehee
Yeah!!! XD!
Hi pups!
I will review later but I just want to say she means "sexy" not the s word.
I saw this and instantly thought of "I'm Peeta and I know it" parody
Perhaps you could expand the parody into a full song? You only really gave us a small bit of the song. Maybe if you add on to what you have we could enjoy it even more
As Strange said you might want to continue to work on the humor if you want to. The originality is there but the parody doesn't have a lot to offer.
If you continue to write the whole parody perhaps add wittier lines that will leave people wanting more
I'd be interested to see more of this if you add on/revise!
It's cute
Keep writing!
Okay, but i don't know what to do. Well i will try to figure something out. Thanks.
Hey Dogsrule5! Strange here and I have a review for you!
This was an interesting parody. Usually, parodies are never on here, so it was a surprise to see one. Now, here's a quick note. There's no need to put stars in for the title "I'm Sexy And I Know It". There is no need to censor it.
As for the parody itself, it is somewhat dry. I understand it is clever, but it seemed dry as it was short. This parody would be funnier if you put out a whole song devoted to food, or at least a chorus and a verse. That wouldn't be bad, huh? I take this as a single verse, and it wasn't bad. I love food, so I couldn't deny this.
Oh, quick nitpick.
Uh, you misspelled Ain't, just so you know.
I guess, the humor could be improved on this. Pretty similar to the song, and should be extended.
Overall, decent job.
Strange gives you..
6.1/10
Decent job,
Keep writing,
Stay groovy, my friend.
I know I missed spelled Ain't, but i just didn't know how to spell it. but thanks though