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  • Poetry » Spiritual, Culture Re: Fighting for leaves

    I've just been reading through this poem and I think it is absolutely beautiful. Your imagery is lovely and I love your description of the leaves as they fall. It ...

    Dec 8, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Mask Stained Red

    This poem contains so much imagery, and I love your vivid descriptions of the mask! The poem is a clear representation of how people hide who they truly are because ...

    Dec 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: Where is God When I Need Him?

    This poem is so original and I can totally relate to it. Not because I have been in this situation myself, but because I often question God, as well as ...

    Dec 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: For Wondrous Wretched Lover

    This poem is beautifully crafted and very well written, I love all of the imagery you used, it really makes me think about how badly people are treated in relationships ...

    Dec 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: What We Have.

    I love the meanings in this poem, it is very insightful and contains some very powerful imagery. However, a few things to keep in mind: You need to take a ...

    Dec 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Citadel (revised)

    Okay, So I've read this poem after reading the original and may I just say... Wow. Like I said before, you really do have a gift with words; you can ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Citadel

    I loved this poem, it's so powerful and it touched my heart - you are very gifted and should be proud of your talent. I especially love the line, 'But ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Farewell darling

    This is such a lovely poem - I could literally feel the emotion of both the characters featured in it. Overall it was very smooth, even though both the lines ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Light in the Darkness

    This is a very powerful poem with lots of hidden meanings that reside behind it. I love the contrast between light and dark, and the slightly gothic touch you gave ...

    Nov 29, 2014


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