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Re: Popcorn
XD this is amazing! Loved your unique humor and awesome idea to write this poem. Wanna know something just...dreadful? >.> I'm out of popcorn at my house! The horror! Haha, ...
Jan 15, 2017 -
Re: Prescription Peace
Your description of this poem was: "A Poem about suicide... like literally every other poem on here lmaoooo". I take offense to that, being suicidal myself. Suicidal people take offense ...
Jan 13, 2017 -
Re: how was your day?
Damn. You write really good poetry, Marmalade! :D I love reading your newest and latest works you post. I see you've gotten a lot of likes, so you must be ...
Dec 20, 2016 -
Re: I Hate It When I Can't Let Go
Like @ChieRynn below, *cries* I'm sorry, but this is emotional. It just reminds me of all the guys I've fallen for, when I was blinded by hope, shattered by "love" ...
Dec 19, 2016 -
Re: Second Grade Seranade
Wow, Ghostie. (Is it okay if I call you Ghostie? The name sounds adorable :D ) It's, well, hard to admit this but this poem is making me cry honestly. ...
Dec 16, 2016 -
Re: I Should Be an Author! (School Argumentative Essay)
¡Hola! I simply popped in to give some advice, of course, in a positive way of suggesting changes! What I liked: 1.) The vocabulary wasn't "easy", " big", "small", "the ...
Dec 5, 2016 -
Re: falling at wonderful heights
...this screams his name over and over...I've been feeling and going through and hating this the past few days. It's pure h*** in the romance part of my life. I've ...
Nov 2, 2016 -
Re: Blue
I love this poem!!! Blue has become my new favorite color like last month and this poem is so beautiful and tragic. I'm BlueRoses15, obviously, but I've been going by ...
Nov 2, 2016 -
Re: ash mouth
My, this was compelling! Haha, I have never started off a review like that before. I sound like a grandma who says "my" before a sentence. Do I? Haha, I ...
Oct 31, 2016 -
Re: His Name Was Martin.
This really touched my heart when I read this. It brings a sense of reality to a world we create of happy endings and summer memories. I hope that anything ...
Oct 31, 2016 -
Re: Chapter -1
I don't think I've read a more beautiful work of writing on YWS in the past week than this. Every once in a while I read a poem or story ...
Oct 30, 2016 -
Re: Dark Changes
Hi LoyalDay! BlueRoses here to give you a review on this "Dark Changes" writing. Constructive comments first: I suggest keeping your stanza length the same. It eliminates any confusion for ...
Oct 9, 2016 -
Re: When a Bird Sings Chapter 10
.... Wow. This is incredible.Tremendous. Phenomenal. I couldn't stop reading from start to finish. In search of new or recent stories published on here, I found this one and dove ...
Oct 2, 2016 -
Re: Addicted
I can't even begin to describe how this story made me feel....... I was just at some motorcycle stunt show (don't get me wrong, my family wants to come to ...
Sep 24, 2016 -
Re: Chapter 1: Monday
Can you please write more? Because I really, really want to read the next parts of this thrilling new novel. I absolutely loved this! To be honest, first thought as ...
Sep 18, 2016
