plathonstone

Hi there, whatabook! plathonstone here to review (though I'm never very good at them.) I really liked this poem! I loved how simple it was, it reminded me how simple ...

Hi there, whatabook! plathonstone here to review (though I'm never very good at them.) I really liked this poem! I loved how simple it was, it reminded me how simple ...

Can I ask what you mean by 'a little bit too deep'?

You got exactly what I was going for! The bathtub is a release to death, but at the end I put 'what might be' instead of death because at the ...

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thanks for the review! Much appreciated!

thank you for the review!

Sincere thanks. It is so fulfilling to know someone likes my poem :) And also thank you for the correction x

Something about this poem just sucked me to it. I loved it. It was so simple yet told me so so much. I can feel exactly what the poet is ...

Something about this poem just sucked me to it. I loved it. It was so simple yet told me so so much. I can feel exactly what the poet is ...

This poem is supposed to be in verses, however, when I posted it it doesn't appear in verses :(

Thank you so much for this! And you will be happy to know that nearly all of this is fiction. I can't decide if I will write what became of ...

Thank you so much for your feedback, its been really helpful and I'm so glad you enjoyed my story :) And I don't mean to be a pain in the ...

Thank you so much for your response, it really meant a lot. I've been playing around with this quite a bit today and I agree maybe it still does need ...

I loved the movie Inception! It was confusing like this poem haha. I see you have quit by the other review. But I loved the movie so had to read ...