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Piyali Archives Hi! Loved this poem! I think you just spoke my heart out. I liked how you used repetition as a factor because honestly the poem has a greater ...

Piyali Archives Hi! I seriously don't know how to form words for this story, because it is so good. I think it fulfills everything that a good story should have. ...

Hi! Firstly, I wanted to say how gorgeous this poem is. I mean this poem does a good job conveying your feelings and I don't know, but the most fun ...

piyali archives Hi there! Piyali here for a review! It seems that you are new to this site. First of all, WELCOME TO YWS! :D Here we post and review ...

Hi! First of all, very nice. I liked how you started with a bang and kept at it. I think it was good for me until the names of the ...

Hi! First of all can I say how beautiful this poem this is? The imagery and the way you played with opposite words is simple yet elegant. However, there is ...

piyaliarchives Hi! I have not read the earlier chapters, but I still was able to understand this chapter without extra information needed. Your writing is simple and efficient. :) I ...

piyaliarchives Hi there @plume ! Very beautiful poetry, just amazing. Your poem gives a warm feeling of love :) Love it. A thing becomes perfect, not when you don't want ...

piyali archives Hi there @stormblessed242 ! You have written a very action/ adventure plus an emotional story. And I have never seen these two genres together, until now. And I ...

piyali archives Hi there @kookzer ! First of all, welcome to YWS! And woah that is one long submission, I didn't even know such long pieces could be submitted. But ...

piyali archives Hi there @violetfantasy ! The first two stanzas were you hiding the truth, and I was waiting for the third stanza and then BAM! But what if those ...

piyali archives Hi there @ariiskoala ! Firstly, welcome to YWS! Okay now onto the review: When I read the first couple of sentences I thought "these lines have been overused". ...

piyali archives Hi there! Firstly, I liked the poem very much, and as I read each line one by one, I felt sad and satisfied because this describes the feelings ...

piyali archives Hi! Firstly, welcome to YWS! Second of all, you have written a very cute and brief poem. Music you put a smile on my face. You're like a ...

piyali archives Hi! Firstly, very nice poetry. But still, I was left confused by it because I did not know what you were referring to as cars. Lol, I think ...